July 6, 2020
Bicycles
I love riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe. It was blue and could bend in halves. I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins. Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and couldn't bring it home. After that I didn't buy a new bike, even I always dreamt about it. They are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities. People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person. Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year - in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn. The other thing, that amazes me, that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city. I think it doesn't make sense, since the city terrain is mostly flat and you don't need all those extra speed levels.
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for maybe 2-3 years maybe.
It was blue and could bend in halvesf.
I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins.
People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person.
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I've loved riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old.
The correction I made makes it grammatically correct, but I feel the following variant is the most natural: "I've loved riding bicycles since I was 10-11 years old."
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe.;
these two sentences ought to be joined, as the other isn't a complete thought without the first.
Iit was blue and could bend in halvesf.
I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins.
Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and I couldn't bring it home.
After that I didn't buy a new bike, even though I always dreamt about it.
TheyBikes are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities.
People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person.
Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year - in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn.
The other thing, that amazes me, is that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city.
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I love riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. I've loved riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. The correction I made makes it grammatically correct, but I feel the following variant is the most natural: "I've loved riding bicycles since I was 10-11 years old." |
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In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe. In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe these two sentences ought to be joined, as the other isn't a complete thought without the first. In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for maybe 2-3 years |
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It was blue and could bend in halves.
It was blue and could bend in hal |
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I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and couldn't bring it home. Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and I couldn't bring it home. |
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After that I didn't buy a new bike, even I always dreamt about it. After that I didn't buy a new bike, even though I always dreamt about it. |
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They are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities.
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People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year - in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn. Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year |
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The other thing, that amazes me, that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city. The other thing |
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I think it doesn't make sense, since the city terrain is mostly flat and you don't need all those extra speed levels. |
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