July 6, 2020
Bicycles
I love riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe. It was blue and could bend in halves. I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins. Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and couldn't bring it home. After that I didn't buy a new bike, even I always dreamt about it. They are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities. People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person. Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year - in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn. The other thing, that amazes me, that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city. I think it doesn't make sense, since the city terrain is mostly flat and you don't need all those extra speed levels.
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In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for maybe 2-3 years maybe.
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for maybe 2-3 years.
It was blue and could bend in halvesf.
It was blue and could bend in half.
I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins.
People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person.
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I've loved riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. I've loved riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old.
The correction I made makes it grammatically correct, but I feel the following variant is the most natural: "I've loved riding bicycles since I was 10-11 years old."
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe.;
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe;
these two sentences ought to be joined, as the other isn't a complete thought without the first.
Iit was blue and could bend in halvesf.
it was blue and could bend in half.
I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins.
Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and I couldn't bring it home. Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and I couldn't bring it home.
After that I didn't buy a new bike, even though I always dreamt about it. After that I didn't buy a new bike, even though I always dreamt about it.
TheyBikes are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities.
Bikes are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities.
People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person.
Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year - in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn.
Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn.
The other thing, that amazes me, is that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city.
The other thing that amazes me is that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city.
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I love riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. I've loved riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. I've loved riding a bicycle since I was 10-11 years old. The correction I made makes it grammatically correct, but I feel the following variant is the most natural: "I've loved riding bicycles since I was 10-11 years old." |
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In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe.
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for 2-3 years maybe these two sentences ought to be joined, as the other isn't a complete thought without the first.
In my childhood, I had a Russian bike made for teenagers called 'Aist' (Stork), which I had for maybe 2-3 years |
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It was blue and could bend in halves.
It was blue and could bend in hal |
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I rode it a lot alone and with my cousins. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and couldn't bring it home. Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and I couldn't bring it home. Unfortunately, it was stolen when one day I left it at my cousin's home, because it broke and I couldn't bring it home. |
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After that I didn't buy a new bike, even I always dreamt about it. After that I didn't buy a new bike, even though I always dreamt about it. After that I didn't buy a new bike, even though I always dreamt about it. |
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They are pretty expensive in my country, and it isn't convenient to ride a bicycle, since we don't have bicycle paths in our cities.
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People who ride a bike have to ride along the street with cars, which is dangerous for a rider, or ride on the pavement, where you can bump into a child or any other person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year - in summer and 1-2 months in spring or autumn.
Also, you can only ride it 4-5 months a year |
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The other thing, that amazes me, that people buy mountain bikes to ride in the city.
The other thing |
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I think it doesn't make sense, since the city terrain is mostly flat and you don't need all those extra speed levels. |
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