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alexwong2164

Oct. 26, 2021

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Ask the right question!

Finally, I ask the right question and the answers to my question was comprehensive.

First of all, what is my question, secondly what are the right ways to ask such question is?

My question “I want to live in Japan.”

Actually, there so many ways to achieve this goal.

Or, there are too many ways to achieve such goal.

So, I need to narrow down the channels and use the existing resources.

Anyway, after going circle for some time.

Now, I know how to ask this question and I already find some good information.

This dream becomes can becomes a reality.

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Ask the right question!

Finally, I asked the right question and the answers to my question was comprehensive.

First of all, what is my question, s? Secondly, what are the right ways to ask such a question is?

My question is, “I want to live in Japan.”

Actually, this is not a question, this is a statement. I'm not sure what your question actually could be, perhaps "Why do I want to live in Japan?"

Actually, there are so many ways to achieve this goal.

OrIn fact, there are too many ways to achieve such a goal.

So, I need to narrow down the channels and use the existing resources.

Anyway, after going around in circles for some time.,

Now, II now know how to ask this question and I have already fiound some good information.

This sentence needs to be added to the end of the previous sentence. The full sentence should be, "Anyway, after going around in circles for some time, I now know how to ask this question and I have already found some good information."

This dream becomes can becomes a reality.

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Your English is pretty good, but there is some awkward sentence structure going on here. You're on the right track though!

Ask the right question!

Finally, I ask the right question and the answers to my question was comprehensive.

Finally, I asked the right question and the answers to my question was comprehensive.

First of all, what is my question, secondly what are the right ways to ask such question is?

First of all, what is my question, s? Secondly, what are the right ways to ask such a question is?

My question “I want to live in Japan.”

My question is, “I want to live in Japan.”

Actually, there so many ways to achieve this goal.

Actually, there are so many ways to achieve this goal.

Or, there are too many ways to achieve such goal.

OrIn fact, there are too many ways to achieve such a goal.

So, I need to narrow down the channels and use the existing resources.

So, I need to narrow down the channels and use the existing resources.

Anyway, after going circle for some time.

Anyway, after going around in circles for some time.,

Now, I know how to ask this question and I already find some good information.

Now, II now know how to ask this question and I have already fiound some good information.

This dream becomes can becomes a reality.

This dream becomes can becomes a reality.

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