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Inesssssss

Jan. 27, 2023

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Arya Stark

I like Arya Stark the most in the Game of Thrones. "My name is Arya Stark. I want you to know that. The last thing you’ll ever see is a Stark smiling down at you, as you die." This is what she said when she took revenge on Walder Frey. I like her becasue she is a determined girl who runs " wolf blood" with a pure heart. She is kind but not without wisdom. She is fully aware of the way of survival. She has her bravery, her justice, and her gentleness and independence in the heart. In this dark world, she grows like a weed. Even she saw the darkest, but never be part of it. She killed lots of people, but she knows how important the life is. A person who has a strong mind and best "no one".

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She is kind but not withoutlacks wisdom.

She has herwears bravery, her justice, and her gentleness, and independence in ther heart.

Even if she saw the darkest, but things, she will never be part of it.

She killed lots of people, but she knows how important the life actually is.

A person who has a strong mind and best "no one".

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vianb

Jan. 27, 2023

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I have made some correction that i hope you can accept that will help your writing to sound better

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Inesssssss

Jan. 28, 2023

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I have made some correction that i hope you can accept that will help your writing to sound better

Thank you so much!!!

Arya Stark

I like Arya Stark the most in the Game of Thrones.

"My name is Arya Stark.

I want you to know that.

The last thing you’ll ever see is a Stark smiling down at you, as you die."

This is what she said when she took revenge on Walder Frey.

I like her becasue she is a determined girl who runs " wolf blood" with a pure heart.

She is kind but not without wisdom.

She is kind but not withoutlacks wisdom.

She is fully aware of the way of survival.

She has her bravery, her justice, and her gentleness and independence in the heart.

She has herwears bravery, her justice, and her gentleness, and independence in ther heart.

In this dark world, she grows like a weed.

Even she saw the darkest, but never be part of it.

Even if she saw the darkest, but things, she will never be part of it.

She killed lots of people, but she knows how important the life is.

She killed lots of people, but she knows how important the life actually is.

A person who has a strong mind and best "no one".

A person who has a strong mind and best "no one".

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