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SummerTeaWater

April 10, 2022

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Arranging Photos

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.

With the photos, I create an annual album for my kids.

It started when my first child was born in April 2014, and now I have made 7 albums for my three kids.

Today, I collected photos in my phone and my wife's one.

Almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder in my computer now.

It will spend a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun.

I hope my kids will be happy with the new album.

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Arranging Photos

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures for from Aprils to next Marchs.

I don't really understand the sentence

With the photos, I create an annual album for my kids.

It started when my first child was born in April 2014, and now I have made 7 albums for my three kids.

Today, I collected photos in my phofrom mine and my wife's phones.

AThere are almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder ion my computer now.

It will spendtake a lot of time to create a newnother album, however it will be fun.

I hope my kids will be happy with the new album.

You could also say "I hope my kids will enjoy the new album"

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Really good writing, it's so cute that you make photo albums :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 11, 2022

402

Thank you very much.:)

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SummerTeaWater

April 11, 2022

402

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures for from Aprils to next Marchs.

I don't really understand the sentence

I tried to write this sentence.
"I make an album from April until next March every year."

There is one event that I have arranged withe pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.

Today, I collected photos ion my phone and on my wife's one.

It will spendtake a lot of time to create a new album, h. However, it will be fun.

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Great work!

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SummerTeaWater

April 11, 2022

402

Thank you :)

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.

I'm not sure about this sentence...

Today, I collected photos ion my phone and my wife's one.

Almost 10 thousand pictures weare in a single folder in my computer now.

If you have the word "now," usually you would be talking in present tense.

It will spendtake a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun.

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

April 11, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Arranging Photos

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures for from Aprils to next Marchs.

There is one event that I have arranged withe pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.

There is one event that I have arranged the pictures from Aprils to next Marchs.

With the photos, I create an annual album for my kids.

It started when my first child was born in April 2014, and now I have made 7 albums for my three kids.

Today, I collected photos in my phone and my wife's one.

Today, I collected photos in my phofrom mine and my wife's phones.

Today, I collected photos ion my phone and on my wife's one.

Today, I collected photos ion my phone and my wife's one.

Almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder in my computer now.

AThere are almost 10 thousand pictures were in a single folder ion my computer now.

Almost 10 thousand pictures weare in a single folder in my computer now.

It will spend a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun.

It will spendtake a lot of time to create a newnother album, however it will be fun.

It will spendtake a lot of time to create a new album, h. However, it will be fun.

It will spendtake a lot of time to create a new album, however it will be fun.

I hope my kids will be happy with the new album.

I hope my kids will be happy with the new album.

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