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July 26, 2021

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Archery Men's Team

I'm watching the Olympics, archery men's team matches. The Japanese team defeated the U.S. team, and I was so excited about the game!
When I was doing archery, I studied and tried to improve my archery style based on the representative players in each country. I respected Brady Ellison and Jake Kaminski in the U.S., or Rick van der Ven in the Netherlands. (Does someone know one of them?)
Specifically, I really liked Jake Kaminski. I thought his shooting form was the most beautiful and coolest, and I bought the instruction book that he wrote. Of course, it was written in English and there was no Japanese edition. Thus, I made up my mind to translate it by myself. Because I wasn't good at English so much at that time, I could translate only a part of the book as I was helped by English teachers. Also, I couldn't be a competitive player like him. However, I'm positive the experience motivated me to learn English hitherto.

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Archery Men's Team

I'm watching the Olympics, the men's archery men's team matches.

The Japanese team defeated the U.S. team, and I was so excited about the game!

When I was doing archery, I studied and tried to improve my archery style based on the representative players in each country.

I respected Brady Ellison and Jake Kaminski in the U.S., or and Rick van der Ven in the Netherlands.

(Does someanyone know one of them? )

Specifically, I really liked Jake Kaminski.

I thought his shooting form was the most beautiful and coolest, and I bought the instruction book that he wrote.

Of course, it was written in English and there was no Japanese edition.

Thus, I made up my mind to translate it by myself.

Because I wasn't very good at English so much at that time, I could translate only a part of the book asnd I was helped by English teachers.

Also, II also couldn't be a competitive player like him.

However, I'm positive the experience motivated me to learn English hitherto.

"Hitherto" is like... a really old-fashioned word that nobody actually uses.

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ponta

July 27, 2021

217

Thank you for your corrections!

Archery Men's Team

I'm watching the Olympics, archery men's team matches.

I'm watching the Olympics, the men's archery men's team matches.

The Japanese team defeated the U.S. team, and I was so excited about the game!

When I was doing archery, I studied and tried to improve my archery style based on the representative players in each country.

I respected Brady Ellison and Jake Kaminski in the U.S., or Rick van der Ven in the Netherlands.

I respected Brady Ellison and Jake Kaminski in the U.S., or and Rick van der Ven in the Netherlands.

(Does someone know one of them? )

(Does someanyone know one of them? )

Specifically, I really liked Jake Kaminski.

I thought his shooting form was the most beautiful and coolest, and I bought the instruction book that he wrote.

Of course, it was written in English and there was no Japanese edition.

Thus, I made up my mind to translate it by myself.

Because I wasn't good at English so much at that time, I could translate only a part of the book as I was helped by English teachers.

Because I wasn't very good at English so much at that time, I could translate only a part of the book asnd I was helped by English teachers.

Also, I couldn't be a competitive player like him.

Also, II also couldn't be a competitive player like him.

However, I'm positive the experience motivated me to learn English hitherto.

However, I'm positive the experience motivated me to learn English hitherto.

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