May 19, 2020
abou my work
I'm so tired from a part time job.
So, to be honest, I'm so sleepy that I don't wanna write a diary. I'm writing a diary for improving my English skills though.
OK, from here, I'll talk about my part time job .I work as a concierge at luxury condominium of kyoto. Details of my work is taking charge of luggage instead of residents, renting them bicycle when they want,and booking taxi and things like that.Then,there a lot of other works to do.Some of them are complex and require adaptability at times.But,it’s easier once you get used to the job. I have to be a grateful that I can work in such a situation of COVID19.
about my work
Just a missing t.
I'm so tired from amy part time job.
It is YOUR part time job but you could write A part time job as well but it isnt as correct as my.
So, to be honest, I'm so sleepy that I don't wanna write a diary.
I'm writing a diary forto improvinge my English skills though.
When you write im doingn this for it is for a person that is not you, or when youre doing a job. For example = I am working every day for my loving son, so he can go to school. See?
OK, from here, I'll talk about my part time job .I work as a concierge at luxury condominium of kyoto.
Details of my work isare, taking charge of luggage instead of residentsresidents luggage to their room for them, renting them bicycles when they want one,and booking taxis and things like that. Then, there is a lot of other workthings to do. Some of them are complex and require adaptability at times.But, it’s easier once you get used to the job.
Id reccomend not even using Details of my work, as it is hard to do right there are better alternatives such as: I mostly, take residents luggage etc etc. Taking charge of something is used mostly for things like : Taking charge of a work station. Then there are only minor mistakes.
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Amazing i really liked this one and enjoyed reading it. It wasnt hard to understand at all and was really fun to correct youre very good at English and i hope you will only get better!
May 19, 2020
Thank you so much!!
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abou my work about my work Just a missing t.
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I'm so tired from a part time job. I'm so tired from It is YOUR part time job but you could write A part time job as well but it isnt as correct as my.
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So, to be honest, I'm so sleepy that I don't wanna write a diary. |
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I'm writing a diary for improving my English skills though. I'm writing a diary When you write im doingn this for it is for a person that is not you, or when youre doing a job. For example = I am working every day for my loving son, so he can go to school. See?
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OK, from here, I'll talk about my part time job .I work as a concierge at luxury condominium of kyoto. |
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Details of my work is taking charge of luggage instead of residents, renting them bicycle when they want,and booking taxi and things like that.Then,there a lot of other works to do.Some of them are complex and require adaptability at times.But,it’s easier once you get used to the job. Details of my work Id reccomend not even using Details of my work, as it is hard to do right there are better alternatives such as: I mostly, take residents luggage etc etc. Taking charge of something is used mostly for things like : Taking charge of a work station. Then there are only minor mistakes.
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I have to be a grateful that I can work in such a situation of COVID19. |
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