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A Side Effect

ponta 360 · July 3

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I got the COVID-19 vaccine yesterday, and I only have a side effect which is arm pain. I haven't gotten a fever or haven't felt bad. Around where I was inoculated is swollen and sore when I move it. People said it's hard they couldn't raise their arms, but I think it's harder I couldn't toss and turn last night.


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lynn 0 July 3, 2021
A Side Effect
I got the COVID-19 vaccine yesterday, and I only have a side effect which is arm pain.

I got the COVID-19 vaccine yesterday, and I only have aone side effect which is arm pain.

I haven't gotten a fever or haven't felt bad.

I haven't gotten a fever orand haven't felt bad.

Around where I was inoculated is swollen and sore when I move it.

AIt is swollen and sore around where I was inoculated is swollen and sore, and it hurts when I move it.

People said it's hard they couldn't raise their arms, but I think it's harder I couldn't toss and turn last night.

People said it's hardthe worst part for them was that they couldn't raise their arms, but I think it's harderthe worst part was that I couldn't toss and turn last night.

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ponta 360 July 5, 2021

Thank you!!

Thank you!!
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kidneyprivilege 83 July 3, 2021
A Side Effect
I got the COVID-19 vaccine yesterday, and I only have a side effect which is arm pain.

I got the COVID-19 vaccine yesterday, and. I only have aone side effect, which is arm pain.

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I haven't gotten a fever or haven't felt bad.

I haven't gottendon't have a fever or haven't feelt bad.

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Around where I was inoculated is swollen and sore when I move it.

AroundThe spot where I was inoculatedgot my shot is swollen and sore. My arm hurts when I move it.

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"Inoculated" is very scientific and not commonly used in everyday speech.
People said it's hard they couldn't raise their arms, but I think it's harder I couldn't toss and turn last night.

People said it's hardthe worst part is when they couldn't raise their arms, but I think it's harderfor me it's when I couldn't toss and turn while sleeping last night.

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ponta 360 July 5, 2021

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!