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Sorry for the delay. Your grandson is so cute. I like him and I hope he grows healthily and can be a real man when he grows up. The snow in the picture you sent is really heavy, which I don't even ever see. Here in my city, I've never seen this strong snow for at least two decades. Every winter here, it does snow, but the heaviest snow in cities is just like five inches or so and it can't last long. Maybe, just in two or three days, it melted naturally. So stay warm and healthy and hope you have a pleasant winter in New York.
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jimmy_jon
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1 month, 1 week ago
Sorry for the delay.
Your grandson is so cute.
I like him and I hope he grows up healthily and can be a realstrong man when he grows up.
The snow in the picture you sent is really heavy, which I don't even ever seoverwhelming. I've never seen so much before.
Here in my city, I've never seen this strongso much snow for at least two decades.
EIt snows every winter here, it does snow, but the heaviest snow in cities is just likeabout five inches deep or so and it cadoesn't last long.
Maybe,In just in two or three days, it will melted naturally.
So stay warm and healthy and I hope you have a pleasant winter in New York.
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easton
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1 month, 1 week ago
I like him and I hope he grows up healthily and can be a real man when he grows up.
he grows up = the process from beginning to grow to finish growing up
The snow in the picture you sent is really heavy, which I don't even ever see.
Here in my city, I've never seen this strongsuch deep snow for at least two decades.
Every winter here, it does snow, but the heaviest snow in cities is just like five inches or so and it cadoesn't last long.
It can't last long because....(needs a reason)
It doesn't last long.
Maybe, just in two or three days, it just melted naturally.
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  • 1 Sorry for the delay.
  • 1 Your grandson is so cute.
  • I like him and I hope he grows healthily and can be a real man when he grows up.
  • I like him and I hope he grows up healthily and can be a realstrong man when he grows up.

  • I like him and I hope he grows up healthily and can be a real man when he grows up.

    he grows up = the process from beginning to grow to finish growing up
  • The snow in the picture you sent is really heavy, which I don't even ever see.
  • The snow in the picture you sent is really heavy, which I don't even ever seoverwhelming. I've never seen so much before.

  • The snow in the picture you sent is really heavy, which I don't even ever see.

  • Here in my city, I've never seen this strong snow for at least two decades.
  • Here in my city, I've never seen this strongso much snow for at least two decades.

  • Here in my city, I've never seen this strongsuch deep snow for at least two decades.

  • Every winter here, it does snow, but the heaviest snow in cities is just like five inches or so and it can't last long.
  • EIt snows every winter here, it does snow, but the heaviest snow in cities is just likeabout five inches deep or so and it cadoesn't last long.

  • Every winter here, it does snow, but the heaviest snow in cities is just like five inches or so and it cadoesn't last long.

    It can't last long because....(needs a reason)
    It doesn't last long.
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  • Maybe, just in two or three days, it melted naturally.
  • Maybe,In just in two or three days, it will melted naturally.

  • Maybe, just in two or three days, it just melted naturally.

  • So stay warm and healthy and hope you have a pleasant winter in New York.
  • So stay warm and healthy and I hope you have a pleasant winter in New York.

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