Jan. 14, 2022
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Oh, I am very sorry to hear that.
I didn't expect that governments would be manipulated by corporations, and there is still racial discrimination in such a developed country.
In my opinion, governments should work for their people, no matter what skin color they are, and corporations should assist their governments to work for people's good living conditions.
Maybe the fact is the opposite, which is not what we dream of.
Well, I hope everything goes well with you, and you are able to find an ideal country to live in.
Take care and all the best wishes to you.
<p> oh no..the government definitely isn’t helping. They are slaves to the corporations… and the only thing corporations care about is securing profits. I’m gonna leave this country even if it kills me…this place or evil.. and worst part is people think It’s great here.. yeah if you’re rich and white… or just super rich..</p>
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Oh, I am very sorry to hear that.
I didn't expect that governments would be manipulated by corporations, and there is still racial discrimination in such a developed country.
In my opinion, governments should work for their people, no matter what skin color they are, and corporations should assist their governments to work for people's good living conditions.
Maybe the facttruth is the opposite, which is not what we dream of.
Maybe the truth is the opposite, which is not what we dream of.
"What we dream of" is a bit strange here. Maybe "not what we would hope", or "which does not match my idealistic view."
Well, I hope everything goes well with you, and you are able to find an ideal country to live in.
Take care and all the best wishes to you.
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Really good. You come across as passionate, empathetic, and eloquent.
Jan. 23, 2022
Thank you very much.
I didn't expect that governments wcould be manipulated by corporations, and. Also, there is still racial discrimination in such a developed country.
I didn't expect that governments could be manipulated by corporations. Also, there is still racial discrimination in such a developed country.
In my opinion, the governments should work for their people, n. No matter what skin color they are, and corporations should assist their governments to work for people's goodsustainable living conditions.
In my opinion, the government should work for their people. No matter what skin color they are, corporations should assist their governments to work for people's sustainable living conditions.
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Great job!
Jan. 23, 2022
Thank you very much.
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