July 4, 2021
A Near Miss Accident
Today, I almost had an accident when I was writing a report. The report was an experiment report and it included a lot of figures and data. I had written it for three hours, but I forgot to save it. At the moment, Microsoft Word froze and broke off. I thought my progress of the three hours ended up in vain. However, when I rebooted Word, my progress was not lost. The part that I wrote just before freezing was deleted but it didn't a big matter. I had quite a fright.
A Near Miss Accident
Today, I almost had an accident when I was writing a report.
The reporIt was an experiment report and it included a lot of figures and data.
I don't think it is wrong, but most English speakers would prefer not to repeat words too much, so using a pronoun sounds more natural.
I had been writtening it for three hours, but I forgot to save it.
At theat moment, Microsoft Word froze and broke off.
It is unclear what "broke off" in this situation. A computer program becoming stuck is just called "freezing".
I thought my progress of the three hourslast three hours of progress had ended up in vain.
However, when I rebooted Word, my progress was not lost.
The part that I wrote just before freezing was deleted but it didwasn't a big matterdeal.
I had quite a fright.
Feedback
New software is amazing huh. I bet lots of people lost their work before Microsoft finally implemented the auto-save feature.
July 5, 2021
I think so too. I was saved by new technology :)
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Today, I almost had an accident when I was writing a report. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The report was an experiment report and it included a lot of figures and data.
I don't think it is wrong, but most English speakers would prefer not to repeat words too much, so using a pronoun sounds more natural. |
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I had written it for three hours, but I forgot to save it. I had been writ |
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At the moment, Microsoft Word froze and broke off. At th It is unclear what "broke off" in this situation. A computer program becoming stuck is just called "freezing". |
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I thought my progress of the three hours ended up in vain. I thought my |
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However, when I rebooted Word, my progress was not lost. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The part that I wrote just before freezing was deleted but it didn't a big matter. The part that I wrote just before freezing was deleted but it |
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I had quite a fright. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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