I was 12 years old andwhen I swam there. I was 12 years old when I swam there.

When I was a girl, I went sometimes to a beachsometimes went to/I would sometimes visit a very dangerous beach. When I was a girl, I sometimes went to/I would sometimes visit a very dangerous beach.

Word order !

When I was a girl, I went sometimes to a beachoccasionally went to a very dangerous beach. When I was a girl, I occasionally went to a very dangerous beach.

When I was a little girl, I went sometimes to a beachwent to a very dangerous beach. When I was a little girl, I sometimes went to a very dangerous beach.

I would put little girl to be more clear - although "girl" does refer to someone young often in English people will still use girl referring to a female of any age.

When I was a girl, I went sometimes went to a beach which was very dangerous. When I was a girl, I sometimes went to a beach which was very dangerous.

There were enormous, violent waves that beawould beat against the rocks. There were enormous, violent waves that would beat against the rocks.

There weren't any trees or restaurants. There weren't any trees or restaurants.

Sounds incomplete without any ! Alternatively; There were also no trees or restaurants.

There weren't any trees/there were no trees or restaurants. There weren't any trees/there were no trees or restaurants.

you can use "there weren't ANY for uncountable nouns/objects in the negative. You can also say "there were no trees or restaurants" which sounds more natural.

There weren't any trees or restaurants. There weren't any trees or restaurants.

There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his womanife would cooked him some fish. There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his wife would cook him some fish.

We would never say ‘his woman’ many people would take offence to this, we would say his wife or his partner, but the prior being the most common.

There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his womanife cooked some fish. There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his wife cooked some fish.

There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his womanife/partner/girlfriend cooked some fish. There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his wife/partner/girlfriend cooked some fish.

"his woman" can sometimes be seen as an offensive tone in English.

There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his womanife cooked some fish. There was just a little fisherman's house where sometimes his wife cooked some fish.

(Is it correct to say "woman" or is it best to say "wife"?) (Is it correct to say "woman" or is it best to say "wife"?)

More common: is it better to say…

(Is it correct to say "woman" or is best to say "wife"?) (Is it correct to say "woman" or is best to say "wife"?)

Wife. Definitely wife.

(Is it correct to say "woman" or is best to say "wife"?) (Is it correct to say "woman" or is best to say "wife"?)

sometimes saying "his woman" in English can come off a bit possessive and it's best to say wife. If they are not married but relationship status is stronger then dating you can use "partner"

(Is it correct to say "woman" or is best to say "wife"?) (Is it correct to say "woman" or is best to say "wife"?)

It's better to say "wife" in the US.

One time a jellyfish touched my knee and, oh my God!!! One time a jellyfish touched my knee and, oh my God!!!

One time a jellyfish touched my knee and, oh my God!!! One time a jellyfish touched my knee and, oh my God!!!

This sentence is past tense.

It burnsed! It burned!

It burnsed! It burned!

This is still past tense.

I cried a lot and the fisherman's wife was reallbecame very worried. I cried a lot and the fisherman's wife became very worried.

However, I quite liked that beach: it was lonely, clean, savage. However, I quite liked that beach: it was lonely, clean, savage.

However, I quite liked that beach, however: lonely, clean, savage. I quite liked that beach, however: lonely, clean, savage.

We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.

Anyway, it is probablye that I will never come backreturn, for many reasons and t. This is the best for both me and for my memories. Anyway, it is probable that I will never return, for many reasons. This is best for both me and my memories.

Anyways, it is probablye that I will never comereturn back for many reasons, and this is the best for me and for my memories.thing I can do for me. Anyways, it is probable that I will never return back for many reasons, and this is the best thing I can do for me.

Anyway, it is probably that I never come back for many reasons and this is the, which is best for me and for my memories. Anyway, it is probably that I never come back for many reasons, which is best for me and for my memories.

Anyway, it isI probably that I never comewent back for many reasons and this is the best for me and for my memories. Anyway, I probably never went back for many reasons and this is the best for me and for my memories.