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Dec. 5, 2020

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A letter for my dad

My dear dad, I’m writing for you again! We are really glad to received your letter today. All the words are integrated the love and true feelings. Although I stay far away from you , I still can get the feeling of your sincerely solicitude. It make me miss you so much.
Today is 5th,December, I’ll have a 49-days winter holiday and the airplane ticket to home have booked already. I’ll go with a girl who in the same city and her roommate. We planed to take the plane together on 8 o’clock morning. It is not much expensive that we take the plane because we booked it in advance. Everyone is kindly for me ,so do I treasure them sincerely. I and my roommates are close friend now. I also took part in the foreign language association. I remembered the last meeting of new people, someone introduced himself by Russian, someone sang by Korean and most of us introduced ourselves by English; after that ,we had a funny sports. Dad, as to get a driver’s license ,I haven’t considered about it, maybe get it next time.
Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things happened these day to I don’t know what I to talk,haha. I often have a video call with grandma and mom in my free time or after class, they are fine. But I have to tell you something grievous. We adopted another a black-white cat, both of them are cute, naughty. They played with grandma everyday. Grandma and mom attended them carefully: eat well, wash well, play well, that’s why I love to have a call to see them. But it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither the two little cats survived. Mom failed to find the animals hospital, grandma only could did just saw them off silently and it was really a sad night for me. I supper loathe something passing away, it reminded me the white cat which had died in front of me long time ago. Afterwards grandma always said she was afraid to check the box(they remains inside it ) ,she consistently hoped they just got a minor ill, they would alive and play with her again. Grandma have been missing the moment she opened the door as two cats squeezing from the crack; missing the moment she did some clean as two cats disturbed her and played around•••••That’s stop talking about it ,it’s too grievous, everything will be fine ,we’ll miss them forever.
Dear dad, as an English major, it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English. My grammar teacher and I are good friend, she is friendly and easygoing, patient and humorous. Whatever any questions I ask her, she always could teaches me patiently and encourage me a lot: give me the toward direction. We also have foreign teachers. Although foreign teacher have changed three times, I specially like this one. He comes from Pakistan and he has a pure ancient. What’s more ,he always try to stay close with us and he has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and have a talk after class in Chinese, haha. The funniest thing is that I came across him on the second floor of the canteen , wore a cap and concealed his face in the crowd in case someone would recognized him. However, I still greeted to him. And then he sat beside us suddenly and ate together. All of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me ,I could had a good communication with him. He talked a lot and I shared something about the school. So there are a lot of joys in English communication. Besides that, I often use some apps as to chat with people from around the world. I met a friend come from Italy, he is also found of watching anime and playing video game; in addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning English. I sent him a composition I written and he corrected it patiently. I’m glad to teach Chinese as well. I got to know many friends around the world. Last time I chatted with a American too much to my fingers are really hurt. What’s more, I have a friend from the Philippines. I knew about him nearly 6 months and I used to often have a video call with him in English, and he will go to the Taiwan for work next month, we promised we will meet someday, haha. But most of them have much time difference than us, for example: when I said good morning for him , but he was going to sleep. By the way, I like to post my English composition to a website, there are many friendly people corrected my mistakes and encourage never give up. likewise ,they through learning Chinese is difficult for them. There are more and more people starting learn Chinese, but it seems that Chinese is a supper I difficult language.
The other thing is that we went out of the school and had a self service barbecue together; then went the Penglai Pavilion, a national 5A tourist attraction. The ticket to it was expensive during busy season, but we entered free because of student ID card ! there are qijiguang’s old home and a lots of old town, old building and green mountains. Standing on the top of here ,we could feast our eyes for the ocean, a large place of golden beach. It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, blue sky and golden sands could blazing the humanize brilliance. Now some light snow were falling from the sky, with dancing fell on our clothes by the wind. We took a lot of pictures as a memory. Then when I went back, I didn't want to go by car. I rode a self-help electric car back to school. Although it was very cool, it was too cold for me to wear gloves. My hands were frozen. But I rode for nearly 20 minutes for 2 yuan. It was really cost-effective, haha.
Dad, there are too much things to I can’t tell you all. The winter holiday is coming, we won’t go back to hometown as usual. I think I should find a part-time job to improve myself and buy some gifts for grandma and mom. Dad, all we want to see is you living happily there, don’t worry about us ,we are always waiting for you home. I had a call with grandma, all she said from this year to next year and next year, we could see you soon! All she wanna is you be fine. Mom cut a new hairstyle: long wave hair, is beautiful and she showed me many new clothes. Last time She wore a white T-shirt, so brisk and energy, just like a successful woman, haha. Dear dad, that’s all, I’ll write to you often!!
-------your dear son


亲爱的爸爸,我又来给你回信了!今天能收到你的信让我们十分开心,字字带情带意,哪怕远在异乡也能感受到你真挚的关怀,让我更加得思念你!
现在是12月5号,我下个月就放寒假49天了,飞机票也早早订好了,还是跟那个老乡女孩和她舍友,我们三个人一起坐早上八点的飞机,因为我们是提前抢到的低价飞机票,所以不是很贵。我身边的人都对我很好,我也愿意真诚地对待他们,我和舍友们早早是关系紧密的朋友了,我也参加了外语协会,记得那天新人见面会,有人用俄语做自我介绍,有人用韩语唱歌,我们都是用英文做自我介绍,还有举办趣味运动会等等。爸爸,关于考驾照这事我现在没有考虑,等以后再说吧。
亲爱的爸爸,隔了好长时间没给你写信,最近发生了好多事不知道从何开始说起,哈哈。我每天有空或放学的时候都会跟奶奶妈妈视频,她们都挺好的,有件很伤心的事我不得不告诉你,我们家本来又再养了一只小黑猫,它两都很可爱很调皮,每天都陪着奶奶嬉戏打闹,妈妈奶奶每天都把她俩照顾都很好:吃饭、洗澡、玩耍,我每天视频过去都想看她两,但很难过的是她两在几周前疑似吃了老鼠药在短时间内痛苦的死了,两小只一个都没活下来,妈妈没找到宠物医院,奶奶只能默默地看着她两离开,我那晚上也很难过,我很讨厌生死离别,就像以前寒假那只死在我面前的白猫一样等等,奶奶后来总说她都不敢看那箱子(她两的遗体),她总期待她两只是得了小病而已,还会挺过来陪她,奶奶想念她在开门时她两从门缝中挤出来的场景,想念在她扫地时她两不断地捣乱•••••不说这事啦,有点伤感,都已经过去了,我们会永远想念她两的。
亲爱的爸爸,作为英语专业,学英语还是件挺有意思的事。我跟我的语法老师关系很好,她平易近人、耐心幽默,我凡是有不懂的题目去问她她都能给我答复,还会不断地鼓励我,给予我前进的目标。我们也有外教老师,虽然换了三次,但这次这个外教我特别喜欢他,他是巴基斯坦人,他发音纯正清晰,一直积极和我们拉近关系,而且他在中国待了三年了,还能说一口流利的中文,上节课我就是用中文跟他聊天,哈哈。最有意思的是之前在餐厅二楼碰到他,他在人群中带着帽子生怕别人认出来,但我还是和他打招呼了,然后没过多久他很突然地跟我们坐在一起吃饭,我的其他几个朋友都应接不暇他的问题,但我还是能够和他正常聊起天,他说了很多,我也跟他分享了一些学校的事。所以说用英文聊天还是挺有意思的。初次之外,我也经常用一些和世界各地朋友交谈的软件,我认识了一个意大利的朋友,他也爱看日本动画、游戏,他在学习中文,我学习英文,我上次写了作文发给他,他很耐心地给我订正讲解,我也很乐意教他中文。我也认识了很多世界各地的朋友,上次跟一个美国朋友聊天打字到手累抽了,我还有一个认识了半年的菲律宾朋友,以前经常和他视频英文聊天,哈哈,而且他下个月就要到台湾工作了,我两约定了以后一定要见面,哈哈。不过大部分的他们跟我们有很长的时差,比如说我跟意大利的那朋友说早安时,他已经是深夜准备睡觉了。对了,我最近很喜欢用英文写些文章发到一个网站上,那里有很多友好的外国网友很积极地给我订正文章,还会鼓励我坚持下去,还跟我说他们学中文也十分头疼呢,现在世界上的确有越来越多的人在学中文,但对他们来说中文是一个超级难学的语言,有个西班牙网友他一心自学中文,我也高兴能帮他并订正中文错误,能一起努力的感觉真好呢!(我之后还会把这封信用我自己的能力翻译成英文发到外网进行订正,这也开始是我的学习方式)
还有件事上次周末我们全宿舍一起去校外吃自助烧烤,然后我们去了国家5A级别旅游景区蓬莱阁,当时旅游旺季门票要一百块,但这次我们凭借学生证居然能免费进入,这里有戚继光的旧居,很多古城、古楼、高山,在这能一览远洋,旁边有炮台,当初就是这里戚继光带领士兵抗击外寇的,在蓬莱阁下面就是一大片的金色沙滩,高山蓝云金沙中却绽放着耀眼的人文光辉,此时天空下起了点点白色雪花,在海风中摇曳地点缀着我们的衣裳,我们拍了很多照片做了纪念。
爸爸,还有太多事发生了来不及全告诉你,寒假也快到了,今年依旧都不回老家啦,我想我会做些兼职来充实下自己,赚点钱给妈妈奶奶买礼物。爸爸,你在那里能开开心心地生活才是我们全家人最想看到的,你不用担心我们,我们一直都在等你呢,我昨天跟奶奶视频聊天问,奶奶她说过了今年再到明年再明年很快就能见到你爸爸啦,她也希望你能好好的。妈妈剪了一个波浪长发的发型,很漂亮,还穿了很多新衣服给我看,她上次穿了件白色衬衫既清爽又活力,像个成功女强人,哈哈。亲爱的爸爸,就说到这里吧,我还会多给你写信的!!
--------爱你的伟源

Corrections

A letter forto my dad

"for" is technically correct, but in this situation "to" is used.

My dear dDad, I’m writing forto you again!

We are really glad to have received your letter today.

All the words are integrated thshowed your true love and true feelings.

I'm not entirely sure what you are trying to say here.

Although I stayam far away from you , I still can get the feeling of your sincerely solicitude.

Punctuation marks come directly after the word with no space.

It makes me miss you so much.

Today is 5th,December, 5th. I’ll have a 49- days winter holiday and the airplane ticket to home haveis booked already.

I’ll go with a girl who is in the same city ands her roommate.

We planned to take the plane together onat 8 o’clock in the morning.

It is not muchvery expensive that we take the plane because we booked it in advance.

Everyone is kindly for me ,so d to me, so I treasure them sincerely.

I and mMy roommates and I are close friends now.

I also took part in the foreign language association.

I remembered the last meeting of new people, s. Someone introduced himself byin Russian, someone sang by in Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves byin English; a. After that , we had aplayed funny sports.

Dad, as to getAs for getting a driver's license ,I haven’t, I've considered about it, maybe get it next timeit but maybe next time I'll get it.

You would say you have considered it because you then say that you may get it next time, which is a consideration.

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things happeneding these day tohat I don’t know what I to talk, about. haha.

I often have a video call with grandma and mom in my free time or after class, t. They are doing fine.

"They are fine" but adding 'doing' sounds nicer.

But I have to tell you something grievserious.

grievous sounds awkward

We adopted another a black-white cat, both of them are cute, but naughty.

They played with grandma everyday.

Grandma and mom attended to them carefully: eat. They fed them well, washed them well, and play well, tith them. That’s why I love to have a calling to see them.

But it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither of the two little cats survived.

Mom failed tocouldn't find the animals hospital,veterinarian, and grandma only could did just saw them off silently and ionly watch them. It was a really a sad night for me.

I supper loathate when something passinges away, i. It reminded me of the white cat which had died in front of me long time ago.

Afterwards grandma always said that she was afraid to check the box (they remains inside it ) ,she consistently. She hoped they just gothad a minor ill,ness and that they would alive anso she could play with therm again.

Dear dad, aAs an English major, it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English.

My grammar teacher and I are good friend, ss. She is friendly and, easygoing, patient, and humorousfunny.

Whatever any questions I ask her, she always could teaches me patiently and encourages me a lot: give me the toward, steering me in the right direction.

We also have foreign teachers.

Although our foreign teacher haves changed three times, I specifically like this one.

He comes from Pakistan and he has a pure anciccent.

What’s more , he always tryies to stay close with us and h. He has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and have a talktalk with us after class in Chinese, haha.

However, I still greeted to him.

And then he sat beside us suddenly and ate togetherwith us.

All of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me ,I could. I had a good communication with him.

He talked a lot and I shared something about the school.

So there are a lot of joys in English communication.

Besides that, I often use some apps aapps to chat with people from around the world.

I met a friend come from Italy, h. He is also found of watching anime and playing video game; in addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning Englishs. He is also learning Chinese.

"and I am learning English" is not relevant to the sentence.

I sent him a composition I writoten and he corrected it patiently.

I’m gladhappy to teach Chinese as well.

I got to know many friends around the world.

Last time I chatted with a American toso much to my fingers are really hurthurt from typing.

What’s more, I have a friend from the Philippines.

I knew about him nearly've know him for about 6 months and I used to often have a video call with him in English, and h often. He will go to the Taiwan for work next month, w. We promised we will meet someday, haha.

But most of them have a much time difference than us, f. For example:, when I said good morning for him , but, he was going to sleep.

By the way, I like to post my English composition to a website, t. There are many friendly people correcteding my mistakes and encourageing me to never give up.

lLikewise , they throughfind learning Chinese is difficult for them.

The other thing is that we went out of the school and had a self service barbecue together;, then went the Penglai Pavilion, a national 5A tourist attraction.

The ticket to it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID card s!

tThere are qijiguang’s old homes and a lots of old towns, old buildings, and green mountains.

Standing on the top of here ,we could feast our eyes foron the ocean, and a large place of golden beach.

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, blue sky, and golden sands could blazing the humanize brilliance.

I don't know what you mean by "blazing the humanize brilliance"

NowWhen some light snow wereas falling from the sky, with dancing fell landed on our clothes byfrom the wind.

We took a lot of pictures as afor memoryies.

Then when I went back, I didn't want to go by car.

I rode a self-helpdriving electric car back to school.

Although it was very cool, it was too cold for me to wear gloves.

My hands were frozen.

But I rode for nearly 20 minutes for 2 yuan.

It was really cost-effective, haha.

Dad, there are too muchany things tohat I can’t tell you all.

The winter holiday is coming, but we won’t go back to our hometown as usual.

I think I should find a part-time job to improve myself and buy some gifts for grandma and mom.

Dad, all we want to see is you living happily there, d. Don’t worry about us , we are always waiting for you at home.

I had a call with grandma, and all she said from this year to next year and next year, we couldis that we hope to see you soon!

All she wannats is youfor you to be fine.

Mom cutgave me a new hairstyle: long wavey hair, is beautiful and she. She also showed me many new clothes.

Last time S, she wore a white T-shirt, so brisk and energy, just like a successful woman, haha.

I'm not sure what you mean here.

Dear dad, tThat’s all,. I’ll write to you often!!

Since you said Dear Dad in the beginning, you don't need to say it again.

-------your dear son

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Overall it's pretty good. I'd put your level at a higher B1. Good luck with your English studies. I wish you luck (:

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alex_love_english

Dec. 6, 2020

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thank you !!! QWQ, I don't know how to express my grateful attitude. I sorry that I maybe wrote too much and it's not easy for you correct my mistakes.thank you again ! I spent the entire Saturday to write it and I was afraid nobody want to correct it because of too much.thank you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OvO

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alex_love_english

Dec. 6, 2020

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Mom cutgave me a new hairstyle: long wavey hair, is beautiful and she. She also showed me many new clothes.

” gave me a new hairstyle” i don't understand

Although I stayam far away from you , I still can get the feeling of, I can still can feel your sincerely solicitud care.

“Solicitude” isn't a word that is used very much. I actually had to look it up. I think "care" might be a better translation of "关怀”

Today is 5th,December, 5th. I’ll have a 49-days long winter holiday, and theI have already booked my airplane ticket to home have booked already.

I’ll go with a girl who ins from the same city and her roommate.

It is not muchtoo expensive that we take the planefor us to fly because we booked itickets in advance.

EBecause everyone is so kindly for me ,so do I to me, I will treasure them sincerely.

I remembered the last meeting ofwhere there were some new people, s. Someone introduced himself byin Russian, someone sang byin Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves byin English; a. After that , we had aplayed some funny sports.

Dad, as tofor getting a driver’s license , I haven’t considered about it, maybeuch. Maybe I will get it next time.

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things have happened these day tolast few days. I don’t know what I to talk,hsay! Haha.

We adopted another a black- and white cat, b. Both of them are cute, and naughty.

ButHowever, it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither the two little cats survived.several weeks ago they both died painfully because of rat position.

If you say that they both died, you don't need to say "neither survived" as well.

Afterwards, grandma always said she was always afraid to check the box,(theyir remains were inside it ) ,and she consistently hoped they just got a minor ill,ness and that they would alive and play with her again.

Grandma haves been missing the momtimes whent she opened the door asnd the two cats squeezing from the crack; missing the moment she did some clean aed through the crack. She is also missing the times when the cats two catsuld disturbed her and played around•••••That’s while she did some cleaning. I should stop talking about it ,because it’s too grievous, e. Everything will be fine , although we’ll miss them forever.

Dear dad, as an English major, I find it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English.

What’s more ,is that he always tryies to stay closebe friends with us and h. He has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and can have a talk with us after class in Chinese, haha.

The funniest thing is that I came across him on the second floor of the canteen , woreand he was wearing a cap and had concealed his face in the crowd in case someoneso that no one in the crowd would recognized him.

AllNone of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me. ,I could hadve a good communicnversation with him.

Besides that, I often use some apps as to chat with people from around the world.

I met a friend come from Italy, he is also found of watching anime and playing video game; is. In addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning English.

I sent him a composition I had written and he corrected it patiently.

I gothave gotten to know many friends around the world.

But most of them halive much time differencin a much different time zone than us, f. For example:, when I said good morning forto him , but he was going to sleep.

There are more and more people starting learn Chinese, but it seems that Chinese is a supper I difficult language.

The ticket tofor it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID card s!

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, the blue sky, and the golden sands could blazing the humanizee so brilliance.t.

NowThere was some light snow were falling from the sky, with dancing fell onto our clothes by the wind.

I had a call with grandma, all she said from this year to nextthat the year andfter next year, we could see you soon!

I am not sure if you want to say "the year after next" or not. "This year to next year" doesn't make sense.

Mom cut agot new hairstyle: long wavey hair,. It is beautiful and she showtried meon many new clothes to show me.

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I didn't correct the things that the other person already corrected. Good job! It was very interesting to read. Sorry about your cats, and I hope you can see your dad soon.

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alex_love_english

Dec. 10, 2020

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You are so helpful, thank you!I can improve it better :)

Grandma and mom attended them carefully: eat well, wash well, play well, that’s why I love to have a call to see them.

Grandma and mom attended to them carefully: eat. They fed them well, washed them well, and play well, tith them. That’s why I love to have a calling to see them.

A letter for my dad

A letter forto my dad

My dear dad, I’m writing for you again!

My dear dDad, I’m writing forto you again!

We are really glad to received your letter today.

We are really glad to have received your letter today.

All the words are integrated the love and true feelings.

All the words are integrated thshowed your true love and true feelings.

Although I stay far away from you , I still can get the feeling of your sincerely solicitude.

Although I stayam far away from you , I still can get the feeling of your sincerely solicitude.

Although I stayam far away from you , I still can get the feeling of, I can still can feel your sincerely solicitud care.

It make me miss you so much.

It makes me miss you so much.

Today is 5th,December, I’ll have a 49-days winter holiday and the airplane ticket to home have booked already.

Today is 5th,December, 5th. I’ll have a 49- days winter holiday and the airplane ticket to home haveis booked already.

Today is 5th,December, 5th. I’ll have a 49-days long winter holiday, and theI have already booked my airplane ticket to home have booked already.

I’ll go with a girl who in the same city and her roommate.

I’ll go with a girl who is in the same city ands her roommate.

I’ll go with a girl who ins from the same city and her roommate.

We planed to take the plane together on 8 o’clock morning.

We planned to take the plane together onat 8 o’clock in the morning.

It is not much expensive that we take the plane because we booked it in advance.

It is not muchvery expensive that we take the plane because we booked it in advance.

It is not muchtoo expensive that we take the planefor us to fly because we booked itickets in advance.

Everyone is kindly for me ,so do I treasure them sincerely.

Everyone is kindly for me ,so d to me, so I treasure them sincerely.

EBecause everyone is so kindly for me ,so do I to me, I will treasure them sincerely.

I and my roommates are close friend now.

I and mMy roommates and I are close friends now.

I also took part in the foreign language association.

I remembered the last meeting of new people, someone introduced himself by Russian, someone sang by Korean and most of us introduced ourselves by English; after that ,we had a funny sports.

I remembered the last meeting of new people, s. Someone introduced himself byin Russian, someone sang by in Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves byin English; a. After that , we had aplayed funny sports.

I remembered the last meeting ofwhere there were some new people, s. Someone introduced himself byin Russian, someone sang byin Korean, and most of us introduced ourselves byin English; a. After that , we had aplayed some funny sports.

Dad, as to get a driver’s license ,I haven’t considered about it, maybe get it next time.

Dad, as to getAs for getting a driver's license ,I haven’t, I've considered about it, maybe get it next timeit but maybe next time I'll get it.

Dad, as tofor getting a driver’s license , I haven’t considered about it, maybeuch. Maybe I will get it next time.

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things happened these day to I don’t know what I to talk,haha.

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things happeneding these day tohat I don’t know what I to talk, about. haha.

Dear dad, I haven’t written to you for a long time, and there are too many things have happened these day tolast few days. I don’t know what I to talk,hsay! Haha.

I often have a video call with grandma and mom in my free time or after class, they are fine.

I often have a video call with grandma and mom in my free time or after class, t. They are doing fine.

But I have to tell you something grievous.

But I have to tell you something grievserious.

We adopted another a black-white cat, both of them are cute, naughty.

We adopted another a black-white cat, both of them are cute, but naughty.

We adopted another a black- and white cat, b. Both of them are cute, and naughty.

They played with grandma everyday.

But it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither the two little cats survived.

But it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither of the two little cats survived.

ButHowever, it was cruel that they are all died painfully in a short time several weeks ago because of rat position, probably, and neither the two little cats survived.several weeks ago they both died painfully because of rat position.

Mom failed to find the animals hospital, grandma only could did just saw them off silently and it was really a sad night for me.

Mom failed tocouldn't find the animals hospital,veterinarian, and grandma only could did just saw them off silently and ionly watch them. It was a really a sad night for me.

I supper loathe something passing away, it reminded me the white cat which had died in front of me long time ago.

I supper loathate when something passinges away, i. It reminded me of the white cat which had died in front of me long time ago.

Afterwards grandma always said she was afraid to check the box(they remains inside it ) ,she consistently hoped they just got a minor ill, they would alive and play with her again.

Afterwards grandma always said that she was afraid to check the box (they remains inside it ) ,she consistently. She hoped they just gothad a minor ill,ness and that they would alive anso she could play with therm again.

Afterwards, grandma always said she was always afraid to check the box,(theyir remains were inside it ) ,and she consistently hoped they just got a minor ill,ness and that they would alive and play with her again.

Grandma have been missing the moment she opened the door as two cats squeezing from the crack; missing the moment she did some clean as two cats disturbed her and played around•••••That’s stop talking about it ,it’s too grievous, everything will be fine ,we’ll miss them forever.

Grandma haves been missing the momtimes whent she opened the door asnd the two cats squeezing from the crack; missing the moment she did some clean aed through the crack. She is also missing the times when the cats two catsuld disturbed her and played around•••••That’s while she did some cleaning. I should stop talking about it ,because it’s too grievous, e. Everything will be fine , although we’ll miss them forever.

Dear dad, as an English major, it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English.

Dear dad, aAs an English major, it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English.

Dear dad, as an English major, I find it’s quite an interesting thing to learn English.

My grammar teacher and I are good friend, she is friendly and easygoing, patient and humorous.

My grammar teacher and I are good friend, ss. She is friendly and, easygoing, patient, and humorousfunny.

Whatever any questions I ask her, she always could teaches me patiently and encourage me a lot: give me the toward direction.

Whatever any questions I ask her, she always could teaches me patiently and encourages me a lot: give me the toward, steering me in the right direction.

We also have foreign teachers.

Although foreign teacher have changed three times, I specially like this one.

Although our foreign teacher haves changed three times, I specifically like this one.

He comes from Pakistan and he has a pure ancient.

He comes from Pakistan and he has a pure anciccent.

What’s more ,he always try to stay close with us and he has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and have a talk after class in Chinese, haha.

What’s more , he always tryies to stay close with us and h. He has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and have a talktalk with us after class in Chinese, haha.

What’s more ,is that he always tryies to stay closebe friends with us and h. He has lived in China for 3 years , so he can speak Chinese fluently and can have a talk with us after class in Chinese, haha.

The funniest thing is that I came across him on the second floor of the canteen , wore a cap and concealed his face in the crowd in case someone would recognized him.

The funniest thing is that I came across him on the second floor of the canteen , woreand he was wearing a cap and had concealed his face in the crowd in case someoneso that no one in the crowd would recognized him.

However, I still greeted to him.

However, I still greeted to him.

And then he sat beside us suddenly and ate together.

And then he sat beside us suddenly and ate togetherwith us.

All of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me ,I could had a good communication with him.

All of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me ,I could. I had a good communication with him.

AllNone of my friends couldn’t answered his questions promptly except me. ,I could hadve a good communicnversation with him.

He talked a lot and I shared something about the school.

So there are a lot of joys in English communication.

Besides that, I often use some apps as to chat with people from around the world.

Besides that, I often use some apps aapps to chat with people from around the world.

Besides that, I often use some apps as to chat with people from around the world.

I met a friend come from Italy, he is also found of watching anime and playing video game; in addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning English.

I met a friend come from Italy, h. He is also found of watching anime and playing video game; in addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning Englishs. He is also learning Chinese.

I met a friend come from Italy, he is also found of watching anime and playing video game; is. In addition, he is learning Chinese and I am learning English.

I sent him a composition I written and he corrected it patiently.

I sent him a composition I writoten and he corrected it patiently.

I sent him a composition I had written and he corrected it patiently.

I’m glad to teach Chinese as well.

I’m gladhappy to teach Chinese as well.

I got to know many friends around the world.

I gothave gotten to know many friends around the world.

Last time I chatted with a American too much to my fingers are really hurt.

Last time I chatted with a American toso much to my fingers are really hurthurt from typing.

What’s more, I have a friend from the Philippines.

I knew about him nearly 6 months and I used to often have a video call with him in English, and he will go to the Taiwan for work next month, we promised we will meet someday, haha.

I knew about him nearly've know him for about 6 months and I used to often have a video call with him in English, and h often. He will go to the Taiwan for work next month, w. We promised we will meet someday, haha.

But most of them have much time difference than us, for example: when I said good morning for him , but he was going to sleep.

But most of them have a much time difference than us, f. For example:, when I said good morning for him , but, he was going to sleep.

But most of them halive much time differencin a much different time zone than us, f. For example:, when I said good morning forto him , but he was going to sleep.

By the way, I like to post my English composition to a website, there are many friendly people corrected my mistakes and encourage never give up.

By the way, I like to post my English composition to a website, t. There are many friendly people correcteding my mistakes and encourageing me to never give up.

likewise ,they through learning Chinese is difficult for them.

lLikewise , they throughfind learning Chinese is difficult for them.

There are more and more people starting learn Chinese, but it seems that Chinese is a supper I difficult language.

There are more and more people starting learn Chinese, but it seems that Chinese is a supper I difficult language.

The other thing is that we went out of the school and had a self service barbecue together; then went the Penglai Pavilion, a national 5A tourist attraction.

The other thing is that we went out of the school and had a self service barbecue together;, then went the Penglai Pavilion, a national 5A tourist attraction.

The ticket to it was expensive during busy season, but we entered free because of student ID card !

The ticket to it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID card s!

The ticket tofor it was expensive during the busy season, but we entered for free because of our student ID card s!

there are qijiguang’s old home and a lots of old town, old building and green mountains.

tThere are qijiguang’s old homes and a lots of old towns, old buildings, and green mountains.

Standing on the top of here ,we could feast our eyes for the ocean, a large place of golden beach.

Standing on the top of here ,we could feast our eyes foron the ocean, and a large place of golden beach.

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, blue sky and golden sands could blazing the humanize brilliance.

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, blue sky, and golden sands could blazing the humanize brilliance.

It’s incredible that the simple tall mountain, the blue sky, and the golden sands could blazing the humanizee so brilliance.t.

Now some light snow were falling from the sky, with dancing fell on our clothes by the wind.

NowWhen some light snow wereas falling from the sky, with dancing fell landed on our clothes byfrom the wind.

NowThere was some light snow were falling from the sky, with dancing fell onto our clothes by the wind.

We took a lot of pictures as a memory.

We took a lot of pictures as afor memoryies.

Then when I went back, I didn't want to go by car.

I rode a self-help electric car back to school.

I rode a self-helpdriving electric car back to school.

Although it was very cool, it was too cold for me to wear gloves.

My hands were frozen.

But I rode for nearly 20 minutes for 2 yuan.

It was really cost-effective, haha.

Dad, there are too much things to I can’t tell you all.

Dad, there are too muchany things tohat I can’t tell you all.

The winter holiday is coming, we won’t go back to hometown as usual.

The winter holiday is coming, but we won’t go back to our hometown as usual.

I think I should find a part-time job to improve myself and buy some gifts for grandma and mom.

Dad, all we want to see is you living happily there, don’t worry about us ,we are always waiting for you home.

Dad, all we want to see is you living happily there, d. Don’t worry about us , we are always waiting for you at home.

I had a call with grandma, all she said from this year to next year and next year, we could see you soon!

I had a call with grandma, and all she said from this year to next year and next year, we couldis that we hope to see you soon!

I had a call with grandma, all she said from this year to nextthat the year andfter next year, we could see you soon!

All she wanna is you be fine.

All she wannats is youfor you to be fine.

Mom cut a new hairstyle: long wave hair, is beautiful and she showed me many new clothes.

Mom cutgave me a new hairstyle: long wavey hair, is beautiful and she. She also showed me many new clothes.

Mom cut agot new hairstyle: long wavey hair,. It is beautiful and she showtried meon many new clothes to show me.

Last time She wore a white T-shirt, so brisk and energy, just like a successful woman, haha.

Last time S, she wore a white T-shirt, so brisk and energy, just like a successful woman, haha.

Dear dad, that’s all, I’ll write to you often!!

Dear dad, tThat’s all,. I’ll write to you often!!

-------your dear son

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