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ponta

Aug. 24, 2021

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A Lawsuit

Tokyo district court has summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he has been sued in Japan. Five Japanese claimed they were deceived in the repatriation program by pretending North Korea was the paradise on earth and they're forced to live tough days. According to customary international law, countries can't be a defendant, but Japan doesn't approve North Korea as a country. Thus, they could bring the action. I'm sure Kim Jong Un won't come to the court, but it's funny if he comes.

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Tokyo dDistrict cCourt has summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he hais beening sued in Japan.

Unless the suit is already over, in which case the sentence should be:
"Tokyo District Court summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he was being sued in Japan."

Five Japanese people claimed they were deceived in the repatriation program by pretending North Korea was the paradise on earth and they're forced to live tough days.

In general if the nationality ends in -an you don't add "people": Korean, German, American
If the nationality ends in -ese or -ic you add "people": Japanese, Chinese, Lebanese, Icelandic, Gaelic
Greek, Swede, Dane, Finn don't need "people"
French, Swiss do need "people" (or you can change French to Frenchman)

According to customary international law, countries can't be a defendants, but Japan doesn't approvrecognise North Korea as a country.

recognize if you follow American conventions.

Thus, they could bring the actionsue them.

I'm sure Kim Jong Un won't come to the court, but it's would be funny if he comes.

or: I'm sure Kim Jong Un won't come to court, but it would be funny if he does.

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I wish he would! XD

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ponta

Aug. 27, 2021

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Thank you so much!

The Tokyo dDistrict cCourt has summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he hais beening sued in Japan.

Five Japanese people claimed they were deceived in theby a repatriation program bythat pretendinged North Korea was thea paradise on earth and they're forced to livforced them to endure tough days.

Instead of tough days, I might write "poverty," "hardship," or be more specific about what their experience was like.

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ponta

Aug. 27, 2021

217

Thank you for your advice!

A Lawsuit

Tokyo district court has summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he has been sued in Japan.

Tokyo dDistrict cCourt has summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he hais beening sued in Japan.

The Tokyo dDistrict cCourt has summoned Kim Jong Un, the supreme leader of North Korea, because he hais beening sued in Japan.

Five Japanese claimed they were deceived in the repatriation program by pretending North Korea was the paradise on earth and they're forced to live tough days.

Five Japanese people claimed they were deceived in the repatriation program by pretending North Korea was the paradise on earth and they're forced to live tough days.

Five Japanese people claimed they were deceived in theby a repatriation program bythat pretendinged North Korea was thea paradise on earth and they're forced to livforced them to endure tough days.

According to customary international law, countries can't be a defendant, but Japan doesn't approve North Korea as a country.

According to customary international law, countries can't be a defendants, but Japan doesn't approvrecognise North Korea as a country.

Thus, they could bring the action.

Thus, they could bring the actionsue them.

I'm sure Kim Jong Un won't come to the court, but it's funny if he comes.

I'm sure Kim Jong Un won't come to the court, but it's would be funny if he comes.

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