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July 5, 2021

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A Landslide

July 3rd, a huge landslide happened in Atami city because of heavy rain. It destroyed 130 buildings, and, currently, 80 people are still unaccounted for and three people were dead. I saw the video that the landslide swallowed houses on news; it was overwhelming and horrible. Some people say the landslide was caused because of solar panels placed in mountains near the city. Trees were cut down to establish the solar power plant, and mountains lost the function to store water. I feel disasters have recently happened many times due to heavy rain. I guess global warming and climate change are one part of the reasons.

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A Landslide

On July 3rd, a huge landslide happened in Atami city because of heavy rain.

It destroyed 130 buildings, and, currently, 80 people are still unaccounted for and three people weare dead.

I saw thea video on the news that the landslide was swalloweding houses on news; it was overwhelming and horrible.

Some people say the landslide was caused because of solar panels placed in mountains near the city.

Trees were cut down to establish the solar power plant, and mountains lost the function to store water.

I feel disasters have recently happened many times due to heavy rain.

I guess global warming and climate change are one part of the reasons.

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ponta

July 6, 2021

217

Thank you so much!

A Landslide

July 3rd, a huge landslide happened in Atami city because of heavy rain.

On July 3rd, a huge landslide happened in Atami city because of heavy rain.

It destroyed 130 buildings, and, currently, 80 people are still unaccounted for and three people were dead.

It destroyed 130 buildings, and, currently, 80 people are still unaccounted for and three people weare dead.

I saw the video that the landslide swallowed houses on news; it was overwhelming and horrible.

I saw thea video on the news that the landslide was swalloweding houses on news; it was overwhelming and horrible.

Some people say the landslide was caused because of solar panels placed in mountains near the city.

Trees were cut down to establish the solar power plant, and mountains lost the function to store water.

I feel disasters have recently happened many times due to heavy rain.

I guess global warming and climate change are one part of the reasons.

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