Oct. 21, 2021
A Joke
Today, I taught the word "joke" in class. I blamed the students that sometimes they were like jokes because they were so rude. They never knew how to respect the others, including the teachers and classmates. They were so noisy during the class, their bad behaviour not only influence the teacher but also the other students. I criticized them that they were selfish and rude.
I've notified some of their parents, most of them said that they had no idea, and hoped me to pay more attention to their kids. It sounded like they would had tried their best to teach their kids. It was really ridiculious. They had risen their kids for at least a dozen years, how they dared to say like that. To think more deeply, it make sense that because of their bad attitude, their kids behaved badly like that.
I am deeply disappointed most of my students and their parents.
A Joke
Today, I taught the word "joke" in class.
I blametold the students that sometimes they were like jokes because they were so rude.
They never knew how to respect thed others, including the teachers and classmates.
They were so noisy during the class, and their bad behaviour not only influences the teacher but also the other students.
I criticized them that they werefor being selfish and rude.
I've notified some of their parents, most of them said that they had no idea, and hoped me to pay morethat I could give some extra attention to their kids.
It soundThey acted like they would had tried their best to teach their kids how to behave already.
It was really ridiculious.
They had raisend their kids for at least a dozen years by now, how they dared tohey say something like that.
To thinking more deeply about it, it make sense that, because of their parents' bad attitude, their kids behaved badly like thattoo.
I am deeply disappointed most of my students and their parents.
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Oct. 22, 2021
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A Joke |
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Today, I taught the word "joke" in class. |
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I blamed the students that sometimes they were like jokes because they were so rude. I |
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They never knew how to respect the others, including the teachers and classmates. They never |
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They were so noisy during the class, their bad behaviour not only influence the teacher but also the other students. They were so noisy during |
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I criticized them that they were selfish and rude. I criticized them |
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I've notified some of their parents, most of them said that they had no idea, and hoped me to pay more attention to their kids. I've notified some of their parents, most of them said that they had no idea, and hoped |
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It sounded like they would had tried their best to teach their kids.
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It was really ridiculious. It was really ridicul |
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They had risen their kids for at least a dozen years, how they dared to say like that. They had raise |
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To think more deeply, it make sense that because of their bad attitude, their kids behaved badly like that. T |
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I am deeply disappointed most of my students and their parents. |
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