Sept. 23, 2021
A horrible Sunday
Last Sunday must be darkest Sunday that I ever had. Our teachers announced that we need to make up the missed lessons in next Monday. All of us were upset because Monday is a day which is usually filled with our major classes! In the Monday, we often start at 8:00a.m. and end our class at 8:00 p.m.. In addition to that crazy schedule, one of our teacher's class is dull. I mean that the textbook is impressive and fantastic. But the way he teaching us just disapointed me and it is confusing at same time. He is always chatting with us about different entertainment news which is off the class topic. Moreover, some of his stereotypes on my country always offend me. Luckily, I at least enjoys reading the textbook.
A horrible Sunday
Last Sunday must be the darkest Sunday that I've ever had.
Our teachers announced that we need to make up the missed lessons in next Monday.
All of usWe were all upset because Monday is a day which is usually filled with our major classes!
In theOn Monday, weour classes often start at 8:00 a.m. and end our class atgo till 8:00 p.m..
In addition to that crazy schedule, one of our teacher's classes is dull.
I mean that the textbook is impressive and fantastic.
But the way he teaching us just disapointed me and it is confusing at same timeThe textbook is impressive and fantastic, but the way he teaches the class is just confusing and disappointing.
He is always chatting with us about differentoff topic entertainment news which is off the class topic.
Moreover, some of his stereotypes onabout my country always offend me.
Luckily, I at least enjoys reading the textbook at least.
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I mostly just made your sentences a bit more natural sounding.
Sept. 23, 2021
Thank you! Your corrections will help me a lot.
Sept. 24, 2021
I think the key part here is "one of". One of (multiple classes) is dull. You can't have one of only one class.
Sept. 25, 2021
wow, thank you guys are taking this problem seriously. I looked through my grammar book. "one of " has two kinds of usages. But “one of” must be followed by plural nouns.
Sept. 25, 2021
And my original sentence may be misleading. I want to say a course is dull.
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A horrible Sunday |
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Last Sunday must be darkest Sunday that I ever had. Last Sunday must be the darkest Sunday that I've ever had. |
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Our teachers announced that we need to make up the missed lessons in next Monday. Our teachers announced that we need to make up |
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All of us were upset because Monday is a day which is usually filled with our major classes!
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In the Monday, we often start on 8:00a.m. and end our class 8:00 p.m.. |
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In addition to that crazy schedule, one of our teacher's class is dull. In addition to that crazy schedule, one of our teacher's classes is dull. |
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I mean that the textbook is impressive and fantastic.
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But the way he teaching us just disapointed me and it is confusing at same time.
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He is always chatting with us about different entertainment news which is off the class topic. He is always chatting with us about |
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Moreover, some of his stereotypes on my country always offend me. Moreover, some of his stereotypes |
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Luckily, I at least enjoys reading the textbook. Luckily, I |
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In the Monday, we often start at 8:00a.m. and end our class at 8:00 p.m..
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