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Jack

Jan 13

English

1 min read

A Feedback to My Teacher

Hi Mica, thank you for willing me to send you feedback about our lessons.

This text will be a little long, so please be patient and I also don't want it to bring you any unpleasant things.

The reason I choose you as my teacher is because your major is educational English. That means you not only have good English but also know teaching skills.

Apart from this, you are very energetic, passionate and positive, so I believe learning from you is a good choice.

I am very satisfied with your lessons, but to make it more efficient, I will let you know my opinion on teaching.

For me, my goal is to practice my speaking, so guide me to speak more, and only stop me when I make mistakes. Of course, you have to tell me the correct expressions.

Please don't worry that I will think you are not positive enough, never, ever. I will let you know that I am done.

In short, it is my great honor to learn from you and other teachers. All of you are excellent.

I will learn in your school for a long time until I can speak good English. I will remember your school and the teachers who have taught me forever. Thank you very much and have a good night.

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Hi Mica, thank you for willing me to send you feedback about our lessons.

Hi Mica, thank you for willasking me to send you feedback about our lessons.

Hi Mica, thank you for willletting me to send you feedback about our lessons.

Grammar

This text will be a little long, so please be patient and I also don't want it to bring you any unpleasant things.

This text will be a little long, so please be patient and I also. Also, I don't want it to bringcause you any unpleasant thingemotions.

I don't mean to offend you.
I hope the feedback isn't too negative.

This text will be a little long, so please be patient and. I also don't want it to bringcause you any unpleasant thfeelings.

The sentences are missing a connection between the two idea. e.g. "Don't worry I don't want it..." instead of "also"
Grammar

The reason I choose you as my teacher is because your major is educational English.

The reason I choose you as my teacher is because your major is educationaled in teaching English.

The reason I choose you as my teacher is because your major is educational English.

Spelling

That means you not only have good English but also know teaching skills.

That meansis demonstrates that you not only have a good level of English but also knowhave teaching skills.

That means you not only have good English but also knowhave teaching skills.

You can also use "...know English well but..."
Grammar

Apart from this, you are very energetic, passionate and positive, so I believe learning from you is a good choice.

Apart from/In addition to this, you are very energetic, passionate and positive, so I believe learning from you iwas a good choice.

so I believe that I made the right choice in choosing to learn with you.

Apart from this, you are very energetic, passionate and positive, so I believe learning from you iwas a good choice.

I'm assuming the past, as feedback is generally given after having received lessons.
Grammar

I am very satisfied with your lessons, but to make it more efficient, I will let you know my opinion on teaching.

I am very satisfied with your lessons, but to make it even more efficient, I willant to let you know my opinion on your teaching methods.

I am very satisfied with your lessons, but to make ithem more efficient, I will let you know my opinion on teaching.

"will" is not wrong, but "would like to" sounds/reads better
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For me, my goal is to practice my speaking, so guide me to speak more, and only stop me when I make mistakes.

For me, my goal is to practice my speaking, so guidI feel that you could encourage me to speak more, and only stopping me when I make mistakes.

only stopping me for corrections when I make mistakes.
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Of course, you have to tell me the correct expressions.

Of course, you have to tell me the correct expressions.

Of course, you have to let me know the right ways of saying things.

Please don't worry that I will think you are not positive enough, never, ever.

Please don't worry that I will think you a're not positive enough, never, ever.

Please don't worry that I will think you are not positive enough, never, ever.

"you don't have to ever worry about that" is more expressive than "never, ever" which would probably only be used quite informally, for example while speaking
Stylistic

I will let you know that I am done.

I will let you know that I am done.

Not sure what you meant here. Done with?
I'll let you know when I am finished.

I will let you know that I am done.

Not sure what you are referring to here - please elaborate
Usage
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In short, it is my great honor to learn from you and other teachers.

In short, it is mya great honour to learn from you and the other teachers.

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All of you are excellent.

I will learn in your school for a long time until I can speak good English.

I will learnstay in your school for a long time, until I can speak good English.

I will learn in your school for a long time until I can speak good English well.

Stylistic
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I will remember your school and the teachers who have taught me forever.

I will always remember your school and the teachers who have taught me forever.

I will always remember my time at this school and all of the teachers who helped/taught me.
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Thank you very much and have a good night.

Thank you very much and have a good night.

Thanks a bunch! Have a great night! - casual.

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