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ponta

Aug. 13, 2021

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A Dial Lock

I tried to open a 3-digit dial lock that I had locked five years ago. At first, I tested some numbers I remembered dimly but it didn't open. So, I did a brute force attack from 000 to 999. I could unlock it at 890, and I regretted not starting from 999, and my index finger is sore now.

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A Dial Lock

I tried to open a 3-digit dial lock that I had locked five years ago.

At first, I tested some numbers I remembered dimly but it didn't open.

So, I did a brute force attack going from 000 to 999.

I could unlocked it at 890, and I regretted not starting from 999, and since my index finger is sore now.

"And" was understandable, but "since" makes the cause/effect relationship more obvious and sounds more natural.

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I hope your index finger feels better now!

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ponta

Aug. 14, 2021

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Thank you so much!

A Dial Lock

I tried to open a 3-digit dial lock that I had locked five years ago.

At first, I tested some numbers I remembered dimly but it didn't open.

So, I did a brute force attack from 000 to 999.

So, I did a brute force attack going from 000 to 999.

I could unlock it at 890, and I regretted not starting from 999, and my index finger is sore now.

I could unlocked it at 890, and I regretted not starting from 999, and since my index finger is sore now.

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