June 18, 2021
A Bear Appeared in a Residential Area
This morning, a bear haunted a residential area in Hokkaido, Sapporo. The bear was a brown bear whose body length was 1.5 meters. It strolled around and injured four people. It invaded a middle school, a military base, and an airport beside the base. The police and hunters chased it and, finally, hunters could get rid of it. A specialist of bears says the bear had dysosmia and wandered into the city.
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This morning, a bear hauntedwas found in a residential area in Hokkaido, Sapporo.
This morning, a bear was found in a residential area in Hokkaido, Sapporo.
"haunted" is used more for ghosts or spirits. But, it could be used here in a more creative sense though.
The police and hunters chased it and, finally, huntersuntil hunters finally could get rid of it.
The police and hunters chased it until hunters finally could get rid of it.
sounds better to me
June 19, 2021
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A Bear Appeared in a Residential Area |
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This morning, a bear haunted a residential area in Hokkaido, Sapporo.
This morning, a bear "haunted" is used more for ghosts or spirits. But, it could be used here in a more creative sense though. |
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The bear was a brown bear whose body length was 1.5 meters. |
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It strolled around and injured four people. |
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It invaded a middle school, a military base, and an airport beside the base. |
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The police and hunters chased it and, finally, hunters could get rid of it.
The police and hunters chased it sounds better to me |
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A specialist of bears says the bear had dysosmia and wandered into the city. |
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