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joselysv

March 17, 2021

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5 years from now

When I think in my future I don't have it very clear where i would be in 5 years or what would I been doing.

Sometimes we make plans and are clear what we want to do or to be but there is always some kind of stuff that cross your life and then everything changes and your plans go down.

Making plans is good but we have to have the capacity of renewing them often, when things don't go as you wanted to.

Back to the topic, five years could be a lot of time but also, years pass so fast that sometimes we don't even notice that.

I don't know where I would be but I will like that its would be a happy place, a place that I feel like home, I seem myself like as happy as I could be, getting the dreams that I probably will have in that moment. I don't see myself married or with kids, but enjoying myself and with a good job that could bring me the style of life that a wish to have.

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When I think inof my future I don't have iam not very clear about where iI wouldill be in 5 years or what would II will been doing.

use 'will' when talking about the the future in general. 'Would' is for imaginary and conditional future.

Sometimes we make plans and are clear about what we want to do or to be, but there is always some kind of stuff that crossinterferes with your life and then everything changes and your plans go downwrong .

Making plans is good but we have to have the capacity of renewing them oftenfrequently , when things don't go as you wanted towe wished.

Back to the topic, f. Five years could be a lot of time, but also, years pass so fast that sometimes we don't even notice that.

I don't know where I wouldill be but I willould like that its would to be a happy place, a place that I feels like home,. I seem myself like as happy as I could be, gett. Achieving the dreams that I probably willould have in that moment.

Pay attention to would vs will 'I would like' is a set phrase.

https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/english-grammar-reference/will-and-would

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joselysv

March 24, 2021

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Thanks you very much for your correction. I will check the link right now

5 yYears fFrom nNow

Another way to write this would be, "In 5 Years".

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., must be capitalized in the title.

When I think inabout my future, I don't have it very clearreally know where iI wouldill be in 5 years or what would II will been doing.

Sometimes we make plans and are clearknow what we want to dobe or to bedo, but there is always some kind of stuff that crossthing that happens in your life and then everything changes and your plans go downhill.

Making plans is good, but we have to have the capacability tof renewing them often, when things don't go as you wanted them to.

But going back to the topic, five5 years couldan be a lot of time, but also,some years pass so fast that sometimes we don't even notice that.

When you write, you have to choose between whether you want to write the number as an integer (5) or write the whole thing out (five) and stick with it for the entire article/assignment.

I don't know where I wouldill be, but I willould like that its wouldit to be a happy place, a place that Ithat feels like home, to me. I seem myself like as happy as I could be, gettpossible, achieving the dreams that I'll probably will have in that momthent.

I don't see myself married or withhaving kids, but instead enjoying myself and withhaving a good job that could bring me the style of life that aI wish to have.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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joselysv

March 25, 2021

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Thanks you a lot!!

5 years from now

5 yYears fFrom nNow

When I think in my future I don't have it very clear where i would be in 5 years or what would I been doing.

When I think inabout my future, I don't have it very clearreally know where iI wouldill be in 5 years or what would II will been doing.

When I think inof my future I don't have iam not very clear about where iI wouldill be in 5 years or what would II will been doing.

Sometimes we make plans and are clear what we want to do or to be but there is always some kind of stuff that cross your life and then everything changes and your plans go down.

Sometimes we make plans and are clearknow what we want to dobe or to bedo, but there is always some kind of stuff that crossthing that happens in your life and then everything changes and your plans go downhill.

Sometimes we make plans and are clear about what we want to do or to be, but there is always some kind of stuff that crossinterferes with your life and then everything changes and your plans go downwrong .

Making plans is good but we have to have the capacity of renewing them often, when things don't go as you wanted to.

Making plans is good, but we have to have the capacability tof renewing them often, when things don't go as you wanted them to.

Making plans is good but we have to have the capacity of renewing them oftenfrequently , when things don't go as you wanted towe wished.

Back to the topic, five years could be a lot of time but also, years pass so fast that sometimes we don't even notice that.

But going back to the topic, five5 years couldan be a lot of time, but also,some years pass so fast that sometimes we don't even notice that.

Back to the topic, f. Five years could be a lot of time, but also, years pass so fast that sometimes we don't even notice that.

I don't know where I would be but I will like that its would be a happy place, a place that I feel like home, I seem myself like as happy as I could be, getting the dreams that I probably will have in that moment.

I don't know where I wouldill be, but I willould like that its wouldit to be a happy place, a place that Ithat feels like home, to me. I seem myself like as happy as I could be, gettpossible, achieving the dreams that I'll probably will have in that momthent.

I don't know where I wouldill be but I willould like that its would to be a happy place, a place that I feels like home,. I seem myself like as happy as I could be, gett. Achieving the dreams that I probably willould have in that moment.

I don't see myself married or with kids, but enjoying myself and with a good job that could bring me the style of life that a wish to have.

I don't see myself married or withhaving kids, but instead enjoying myself and withhaving a good job that could bring me the style of life that aI wish to have.

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