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11.12 Letters of Complaint

Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to complain about the electric dictionary that I bought from your online store last Friday. It is really annoying that the dictionary should break down just using about a week.
Last night, I was using it as usual, but it shut down by itself and can't turn on again. I thought it might run out of battery so I charged It the whole night. However, I still can't restart it today. I hope you can follow your warrant policy to repair it or replace a new one for me. Otherwise, I will ask for a refund.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, sincerely
Zhang Wei

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2 months, 1 week ago
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sivanc
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2 months ago
11.12 Letters of ComplaintDissatisfaction
Dear Sir or Madam:,
I am writing to complain about the electric dictionary that I boughtpurchased from your online store last Friday.
It is really annoying that thevery irresponsible of you to sell a dictionary shouldthat breaks down just using about a weekafter only a week of use.
Dear sir or madam 很正式,所以你要一直用正式的风格
Last night, I was using it, as usual, but it shut down by itself and can'will not turn on again.
I thought it might have run out of battery, so I charged It the whole it overnight.
However, I still can't restart it todaytoday it still will not turn on.
I hope you can followwill abide by your warranty policy toand repair it or replace a new oneprovide a replacement for me.
Otherwise, I will ask for a refund.
LookingI look forward to your reply.
Yours, sincerely
Zhang Wei
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gingerbreadwoman
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2 months ago
Dear Sir or Madam:,
I am writing to complain about the electronic dictionary that I bought from your online store last Friday.
It is really annoying that the dictionary should break down just using aboutbroke down after only a week's use.
Last night, I was using it as usual, but it shut down byon itself own and cawon't turn on again.
I thought ithe battery might run out of battery so I charged Iit the whole night.
However, I still can't restart it today.
I hope you can follow your warranty policy to repair it or replace a new one for me.
Otherwise, I will ask for a refund.
LI am looking forward to your reply.
You could write it as you had it, but only if you ended with a comma and used it as your closing (instead of Yours sincerely). Otherwise you need to have a subject (i.e. I).
Yours, sincerely,
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  • Dear Sir or Madam:
  • Dear Sir or Madam:,

  • Dear Sir or Madam:,

  • I am writing to complain about the electric dictionary that I bought from your online store last Friday.
  • I am writing to complain about the electronic dictionary that I bought from your online store last Friday.

  • I am writing to complain about the electric dictionary that I boughtpurchased from your online store last Friday.

  • It is really annoying that the dictionary should break down just using about a week.
  • It is really annoying that the dictionary should break down just using aboutbroke down after only a week's use.

  • It is really annoying that thevery irresponsible of you to sell a dictionary shouldthat breaks down just using about a weekafter only a week of use.

    Dear sir or madam 很正式,所以你要一直用正式的风格
  • Last night, I was using it as usual, but it shut down by itself and can't turn on again.
  • Last night, I was using it as usual, but it shut down byon itself own and cawon't turn on again.

  • Last night, I was using it, as usual, but it shut down by itself and can'will not turn on again.

  • I thought it might run out of battery so I charged It the whole night.
  • I thought ithe battery might run out of battery so I charged Iit the whole night.

  • I thought it might have run out of battery, so I charged It the whole it overnight.

  • 1 However, I still can't restart it today.
  • However, I still can't restart it todaytoday it still will not turn on.

  • I hope you can follow your warrant policy to repair it or replace a new one for me.
  • I hope you can follow your warranty policy to repair it or replace a new one for me.

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  • I hope you can followwill abide by your warranty policy toand repair it or replace a new oneprovide a replacement for me.

  • 2 Otherwise, I will ask for a refund.
  • Looking forward to your reply.
  • LI am looking forward to your reply.

    You could write it as you had it, but only if you ended with a comma and used it as your closing (instead of Yours sincerely). Otherwise you need to have a subject (i.e. I).
  • LookingI look forward to your reply.

  • 1 Yours, sincerely
  • Yours, sincerely,

  • 1 Zhang Wei
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