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michael_sun

Oct. 4, 2021

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060 Bookstore

060 Bookstore
We offer a place for people to come and read. We have been told for a long time that bookstore isn't a good business. Our store allows customers to bring in bags that they like. We don't offer plastic bags. This helps eliminate plastic bags. In addition to our bookstore in this area, we also do pop-ups at markets. When I was a child, I had access to a street full of bookstores. I think that instilled a natural desire to open my own bookstore. And eventually it led me to opening this store. The management of bookstore has many components. The main consideration is to offer best selected books for customers. Our customers include varying degrees of reading journey.

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060 Bookstore

060 Bookstore

We offer a place for peoplpeople a place to come and read.

We ha've been told for a long time that a bookstore isn't a good business.

Our store allows customers to bring in bags that they like.

Isn't that any store?

We don't offer plastic bags.

This helps eliminate the use of plastic bags.

In addition to our bookstore in this area, we also do pop-ups at markets.

When I was a child, I had access to a street full of bookstores.

I think that instilled a naturalin me a desire to open my own bookstore.

It's not natural if it was instilled in you by an external source

And eEventually, it led me to opening this store.

If you want to use "and," connect to previous sentence, you can't start a sentence with it.

The management of bookstore has many componentManaging a bookstore comes with many responsibilities.

The main consideration is to offer the best selected books forto customers.

Our customers include varying degrees ofare all in varying stages of their reading journey.

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michael_sun

Oct. 5, 2021

26

Thanks a lot Sivanc.

060 Bookstore

060 Bookstore

We offer a place for people to come and read.

We offer a place for peoplpeople a place to come and read.

We have been told for a long time that bookstore isn't a good business.

We ha've been told for a long time that a bookstore isn't a good business.

Our store allows customers to bring in bags that they like.

Our store allows customers to bring in bags that they like.

We don't offer plastic bags.

This helps eliminate plastic bags.

This helps eliminate the use of plastic bags.

In addition to our bookstore in this area, we also do pop-ups at markets.

When I was a child, I had access to a street full of bookstores.

I think that instilled a natural desire to open my own bookstore.

I think that instilled a naturalin me a desire to open my own bookstore.

And eventually it led me to opening this store.

And eEventually, it led me to opening this store.

The management of bookstore has many components.

The management of bookstore has many componentManaging a bookstore comes with many responsibilities.

The main consideration is to offer best selected books for customers.

The main consideration is to offer the best selected books forto customers.

Our customers include varying degrees of reading journey.

Our customers include varying degrees ofare all in varying stages of their reading journey.

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