Sept. 23, 2021
049 Pregnant with Triplets
049 Pregnant with Triplets
Mike's wife was pregnant with triplets. This day was mike's birthday and while they were celebrating it，his wife, Rebecca's water broke. They hurried to the hospital, but unfortunately their doctor’s appendix burst open. A new doctor who was quite senior and old came to them. Although he was old, he had lots of experience and he was an excellent doctor. He informed them the bad positioning of one of the baby. However, Mike refuse to talk about it. He insisted that they would walk out of the hospital with his healthy wife and his big three babies. Rebecca went into the surgeon room. When the doctor walked out of the room, he told Mike that Rebecca was fine. Her vitals were good and she just needed sleep. He said that he was sorry that Mike lost the third baby. His umbilical cord was cutting off his oxygen. He was stillborn.
049 Pregnant with Triplets
049 Pregnant with Triplets
Mike's wife was pregnant with triplets.
This dayIt was mMike's birthday and while they were celebrating it，, his wife, Rebecca's water broke.
Having too many commas in a sentence can make it hard to read, and you don't need it hear if you're saying "his wife Rebecca".
They hurried to the hospital, but unfortunately their doctor’s appendix had burst open.
A new doctor who was quite senior and old came to them.
You would just say "old" in this context.
Although he was old, he had lots of experience, and he was an excellent doctor.
He informed them of the bad positioning of one of the babyies.
However, Mike refused to talk about it.
He insisted that they would walk out of the hospital with his healthy wife and his big three big babies.
If you're listing several adjectives for something, the number goes first. "Three big babies" not "Big three babies"
Rebecca went into the surgeonry room.
When the doctor walked out of the room, he told Mike that Rebecca was fine.
Her vitals were good and she just needed sleep.
He said that he was sorry that Mikeo say that they had lost the third baby.
His umbilical cord was cutting off his oxygen.
He was stillborn.
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049 Pregnant with Triplets |
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Mike's wife was pregnant with triplets. |
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This day was mike's birthday and while they were celebrating it，his wife, Rebecca's water broke.
Having too many commas in a sentence can make it hard to read, and you don't need it hear if you're saying "his wife Rebecca".
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They hurried to the hospital, but unfortunately their doctor’s appendix burst open. They hurried to the hospital, but unfortunately their doctor’s appendix had burst |
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A new doctor who was quite senior and old came to them. A new doctor who was quite You would just say "old" in this context.
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Although he was old, he had lots of experience and he was an excellent doctor. Although he was old |
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He informed them the bad positioning of one of the baby. He informed them of the bad positioning of one of the bab |
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However, Mike refuse to talk about it. However, Mike refused to talk about it. |
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He insisted that they would walk out of the hospital with his healthy wife and his big three babies. He insisted that they would walk out of the hospital with his healthy wife and his If you're listing several adjectives for something, the number goes first. "Three big babies" not "Big three babies"
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Rebecca went into the surgeon room. Rebecca went into the surge |
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When the doctor walked out of the room, he told Mike that Rebecca was fine. |
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Her vitals were good and she just needed sleep. |
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He said that he was sorry that Mike lost the third baby. He said that he was sorry t |
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His umbilical cord was cutting off his oxygen. |
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He was stillborn. |
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