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tana_gao

March 21, 2022

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032101 - Rainy days

These days are rainy days.
The cold wind is hauling, and I just stayed at home.
Hope sunshine would come the next day.
On rainy days, sometimes I feel very melancholy.
However, once I wear a thick jacket, my heart becomes light.
Warmness is what I chase for.

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032101 - Rainy days

These days are rainy days.

The cold wind is hauowling, and I just stayed at home.

Hope sunshine would come the next day.

This is fine, but "I hope the sun will come out tomorrow" might sound more natural.

On rainy days, sometimes I feel very melancholy.

However, oncewhen I wear a thick jacket, my heart becomes light.

Warmness is what I chase for.

Maybe "yearn for" or "strive for"?

032101 - Rainy days

These days are rainy days.

The cold wind is hauling, and I just stayed at home.

The cold wind is hauowling, and I just stayed at home.

Hope sunshine would come the next day.

Hope sunshine would come the next day.

On rainy days, sometimes I feel very melancholy.

However, once I wear a thick jacket, my heart becomes light.

However, oncewhen I wear a thick jacket, my heart becomes light.

Warmness is what I chase for.

Warmness is what I chase for.

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