창문으로 보고 있어요
What do you see when you look out the window?
지금 창문으로 보고 있어요.
정원을 볼 수 있어요.
정원에 꽃과 식물 많아요.
우리 집 근처에 작은 거리있어요
거리에서 아이들을 놀 고 있어요. 그들은 자전거를 탄 중이에요.
오늘 너무 바쁜 일이예요. 저는 그 아이들을하고 자전거를 타러 우리 집 떠나 고 싶어요.
Right now I'm looking through my window.
I can see the yard/garden.
There are lots of plants and flowers in the garden.
Near my house there's a small street.
There are some children playing in the street. They are riding bikes.
Today I'm very busy. I want to leave my house and ride bikes with them.
Corrections (1)
Format
창문으로 밖을 보고 있어요
Usage
지금 창문으로 밖을 보고 있어요.
보다 is transitive. You use it with an object (as opposed to with 로. If you use X로 보다, it means you're watching/looking at/seeing something *with* X).
So you can say something like this:
창문 밖을 보다 (there is an omitted 의 after 창문, so it's "look out the window" lit. look at the window's outside)
창문 너머를 보다 (there is again an omitted 의 after 창문. 너머 is a noun meaning "across" so it's "look through the window" lit. look at the window's across)
창문을 보다 (this is just "look at the window")
Usage
정원을 볼 수 있어이 보여요.
볼 수 있다 is more "can see" as in not blind, or "can look at/watch."
To say "I can see ~" as in there's something in your field of sight, you use ~가 보이다.
Usage
정원에는 꽃과 식물이 많아요.
Don't forget your particles! Dropping particles is a fine art that takes a lot of practice. First, you need to learn how to use all the correct particles without dropping them.
Usage
우리저희 집 근처에는 작은 거리가 있어요
저희 - ~어요 politeness match
Again, particles.
Usage
거리에서는 아이들을이 놀 고 있어요.
You don't space 고.
In "The kids are playing," the kids are the subject not the object. As such, you'd use 이 not 을.
Grammar
그들은 자전거를 탄타는 중이에요.
-ㄴ would be past tense.
Grammar
오늘은 일이 너무 바쁜 일이예빠요.
Grammar
저는 그 아이들을하고 자전거를 타러 우리서 저희 집을 떠나 고 싶어요.
Why the 을 before 하고? 저 <-> 저희 politeness match. No space before 고.
타러 is "in order to ride," which doesn't really make sense here. Perhaps you meant 타서?
Grammar
Overall feedback & comment
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