My favorite cafe
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I had French food for lunch today. There's a cafe in Tokyo that serves home-style dishes from the South of France. It's my favorite cafe! I had a jambon-beurre. The cafe seems to use ingredients imported from France. Ever since I discovered this cafe, I can't bring myself to go anywhere else.
My favorite cafecafé
While the diacritics aren't always supported, it is technically more correct to add them when you can on certain words. Café is one of them. It's one of many things than can be confusing about some loanwords English adopted from other languages. Fiancée is another. Most with this accent are from French. Fortunately there's only a handful to remember and I think it might be to try and avoid some pronunciation confusion as it is fee-an-SAY not fee-an-SEE and it's caf-EH (with the 'a' as in calf) not c-Af (where the e makes the 'a' "say it's name" as in, well, the 'a' in name for one). It's mostly memorization though unfortunately because even between these words the é is not pronounced the same. At least not in standard American English.
There's a cafecafé in Tokyo that serves home-style dishes from the South of France.
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It's my favorite cafecafé!
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The cafecafé seems to use ingredients imported from France.
Same as above.
Ever since I discovered this cafecafé, I can't bring myself to go anywhere else.
Same as above.
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Titles capitalize all words, with few exceptions like conjunctions
There's a cafe in Tokyo that serves Southern French home-style dishes from the South of France.
More natural sound. Southern French would refer to the art/ food/ culture of the region as an adjective. “From South France” would imply the dishes were made in France and then sent to Tokyo.
The cafe seemsseemed to use ingredients imported from France.
The sentence is grammatically correct for present tense. Though the rest of your post is in past tense. It’s more consistent to make this sentence also past tense.
Overall feedback
Make sure your tenses match if you talk about something you did earlier today then everything you mention about that event should be past tense. I love a good French cafe. The pastries are always my favorite. Are there any other items on the menu that you want to try?
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I looked the sandwich up. It seems delicious!
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My favorite cafecafé
I had French foodcuisine for lunch today.
There's a cafecafé in Tokyo that serves home-style dishes from the South of France.
It's my favorite cafecafé!
The cafecafé seems to use ingredients imported from France.
Ever since I discovered this cafecafé, I can't bring myself to go anywhere else.
Overall feedback
That sounds like a great cafe :) Great writing!
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