Which do you prefer, baths or showers? Explain why you like
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in my country is not common have batchs, so i prefer showers at the moment, but my aunt have a batchs in her house, i never used her baths yet, and i actually wanna used that some day
Which do you prefer, baths or showers? Explain why you like your choice
The second sentence needs to be a full sentence here.
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inIn my country, it is not common have batchsto take baths, so iI prefer showers at the moment, but my. My aunt havehas a batchsbathtub in her house, ibut I've never used her bathsit (OR I haven't used it yet), and iI actually wanna used thatwant to try it some day.
Here are some notes on your writing: - phrases like "take a bath" or "take a shower" are fixed phrases you just have to memorize. there isn’t really a specific reason why we say them that way and not some other way. - use either "never" or "yet" in a single sentence. in this case, since you're planning to try it in the future, "yet" is a more suitable option
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Great effort! Keep it up. I also prefer showers! It's just more efficient.
- DdubiouslybasilAug 31
Btw, "take a bath" and "have a bath" are both valid. the only difference is that the former is more common in American English, and the latter is more common in British English.
inIn my country, it is not common to have batchsbaths, so iI prefer showers at the moment. However, but my aunt havehas a batchsbath tub in her house, i. I never used her baths yetbath tub, and iI actually wanna used that some daywant to (use it) someday.
"I" is always capitalized. "Have a bath" tends to mean the act of bathing. When referring to the object, it's better to say "bath tub" The part in parentheses is optional
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Great job
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