Writing prompt
Write a story about a Dragon. Make it exciting.It's name is Catsaures
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Catsaures is a dragon made of the body and head of a cat, and its fur resembles the skin of a snake.
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Catsaures is a dragon made of the body and head of a cat, and its fur resemblesbut with the skin of a snake, rather than fur.
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Overall feedback
Very cool! "Fur" is what a cat or a dog has, it is hairy. So saying fur resembles the skin of a snake is confusing, because snakes have no hair :)
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