Flowers from Palombie

Yesterdaw, I was walking ouside, when I saw three beautiful little treesflowers.

Based on the rest of the story, it seems like you mean “flowers” here

They weren't alone and they were kissingsurrounded by other vegetables.

“Kissing” is interesting imagery, but in normal conversation we probably wouldn’t use that word.

I decided to go nearlylook because I wantwanted to know what were this givethese gifts of nature.

- Not sure what you meant by “go nearly” - Use past tense here - Use plural “these” instead of “this”

I took out my smartphonephone and maidtook a photo on an app called "Plantnet".

- Can just say phone - “Took” a photo, not “made” a photo

It helps us to understand what kindidentify the kinds of plants are in front of you.

So, it wasThese were "Hibiscus".

I decided to cut one flower atto take home.

I choosedchose the pink one.

TomorroyTomorrow, I will go back at thisto that place to cut more part of this treeflowers.

I wish I could makeplant a new one in my garden.

Then, I can makegrow a lot of give around meflowers.

For the kids, I will tell themthe kids this story : they have to believe me, this. These flowers are the same as the marsupilami flower !

I don’t quite understand what you mean by “they have to believe me”.

YesterdawYesterday, I was walking ousideoutside, when I saw three beautiful little trees.

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They weren't alone and they were kissing other vegetables.

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Vegetables cannot "kiss" each other, only humans can. Sometimes you will hear people say an animal is kissing them, that means they are licking them. In English for example a dog can kiss a human on the cheek by licking their cheek. Other than that, I'm not sure that vegetables can kiss each other. Grammar issue.

I decided to go nearly because I want to know what were this give of nature.

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Very confusing to read. Where have you decided to go? "I want to know what were this give of nature." That in itself does not make sense, in English when you use the present tense of the word want you have to follow up with a verb in the present tense, so if you wanted to use the word "were" you'd have to say "I WANTED to know what were..." because "were" is in the past tense.

I took my smartphone and maidmade a photo on an app called "Plantnet".

The correct spelling here would be to replace the word "maid" with "made. A maid is someone who cleans houses or buildings for pay, whereas "made" means to have done or made something in the past.

It helps usyou to understand what kind of plants are in front of you.

Understandable. But to sound a bit more fluent you could use the word "You" instead of "Us'.

So, itIt was "Hibiscus".

You don't have to include "So", to sound a bit more fluent you could drop the word "So' and simply say "It was Hibiscus": Or if you wanted to add a bit more context you could say "The plant was Hibiscus"

I choosedchose the pink one.

The correct way to say this would be to use the word "Chose" instead of "Choosed". I don't think "Choosed" is a word in English.

TomorroyTomorrow, I will go back at this place to the garden to cut more part of this tree.

The word "Tomorrow" was spelt wrong. In the second part of the section, if you are referring to going back to a garden or a place with a lot of place with plants or trees, you would use the word garden or park depending on which it is instead of saying "go back to this place" And finally, the last part of the sentence, you can drop the word "part" all together.

I wish I could makegrow a new one in my garden.

If you mean "make" a new tree after cutting the other one down, the better way to say this would be to use the word "grow".

Then, I can make a lot of give around me.

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Making a lot of "give" does not make grammatical sense in English. To give is the action in giving something to someone or something, it can not be used to describe making, creating, growing or doing something.

For the kids, I will tell them this story : they have to believe me, thisthese flowers are the same as the marsupilami flower !