my favorite hobby
I love painting! The messy paint, analyzing colors to achieve value harmony, and the smell of oil paint- ohh, ridiculous. Drawing and painting are the best way to calm the noise in my head; however, when it comes to studying, I get bored, feel drowsy, and I dislike it.
myMy favorite hobby
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I love painting! The messy paint, analyzing colors to achieve value harmony, and the smell of oil paint- ohh, ridiculousamazing. Drawing and painting are the best way to calm the noise in my head; however, when it comes to studying, I get bored, feel drowsy, and I dislike it.
myMy favorite hobby
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my favorite hobbyMy Favorite Hobby
Or My favorite hobby It is very important to make sure the first letter of the first word is a capital letter.
I love painting! The messy paint, analyzing colors to achieve value harmony, and the smell of oil paint- ohh, ridiculousperfect. Drawing and painting are the best way to calm the noise in my head; however, when it comes to studying, I get bored, feel drowsy, and I dislike it.
How I love painting! works, but it sounds like old English. Reading this part feels like old English.
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