Technology and Communication

With the advent of tecnologytechnology, people have started to communicate each other across long distances.

Throughout the history people have used a lot of different devices that rangemethods to communicate, ranging from carrier pigeons to social media apps.

I am not sure I would call a pigeon a "device", so I think "method" works better RangING from sounds a lot more natural here.

However, as these convenienceconvenient methods increase, face to face communication havehas become unimportant.

This state has made people forget to the value of close relationships.

"State" doesn't fit here - you could leave it like this, without any specifier, OR you could say "this situation".

They have started to neglect their parentparents or relatives, and their visits have decreased.

Therefore, the advantages and disadventages of technology regarding communication are dependdependent more on the way how we utilize it.

"they are dependent on" OR "they depend on" "on the way we utilise it" OR "on how we utilise it"

UnlessWhen it doesn't decrease the face to face communication the advent of, this technology is really beneficial.

OR: "If it didn't decrease the face to face communication, the advent of this technology would have been really beneficial." Your meaning was a little unclear here, so I tried to give a few guesses.

But we should utilize it more carefullcarefully.

With the advent of tecnology people have started to communicate with each other across long distances.

Throughout the history, people have used a lot of different devices that range from carrier pigeons to social media apps.

However, as these convenience increase, face to face communication havehas become unimportant.

Communication= 1 thing so has

This state has made people forget to the value of close relationships.

Therefore the advantages and disadventagesdisadvantages of technology regarding communication are depend moretechnology depends on the way howthat we utilize it.

UnlessIf it doesn't decrease the face to face communication the advent of technology is really beneficial.

But we should utilize it more carefull.carefully