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I can dream a lot. Now even there are a termin such as delusional dreamy. I claim that I invent how to stor overthink about some situation. You need describe the situation of language when you learn! This is useful, you learn a huge number of words and construction and... it is difficult, so you want to stop think about situation which don't give you a sleep.
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Verbs after “stop” typically have an “-ing” suffix
I can dream a lot.
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This is technically right, but it has a very different meaning to “I dream a lot”. “I can dream a lot”: you have the ability to dream often, but don’t necessarily actually do it. “I dream a lot”: you actually do dream a lo.
Now evenHowever there areis a termin such as term called “delusional dreamydreaming”.
I don’t know if “however” is necessarily the word you wanted to use, but it makes a bit more sense than “now even”, which doesn’t exist on its own. “Term” is singular, so “there is”. “Such as” is used to introduce lists. Alternatively you could say “however there are terms such as “delusional dreaming”.”. In this case you would need to have an explanation on what these terms that the sentence refers to are about. “Dreamy” is an adjective. I think it would be better to have more of an explanation for this sentence, because it’s very confusing how it links to the rest of the text. It only really becomes more clear at the end of the final sentence.
I claimbelieve that I inventthought of how to stor overthinkstop overthinking about some situationsituations.
“Claim” seems very unnatural here. “Invent” (or “invented” which would be better) would be used for if you had designed/made an actual physical thing. “Some” is used before plural or uncountable nouns (and occasionally in other situations, but only in casual situations).
You need to describe the situation ofin the language when you learnthat you’re learning!
After “need”, if the next word is a verb, then you should have “to” in front of it. OF a language: here, it would be the same as saying “a language’s situation”, which would likely be to describe how it’s doing, such as if it’s a dying language. IN a language: much more common, used to say if you’re doing something (e.g. thinking/speaking) in a certain language, or to describe something like grammatical concepts in a language. Even though I used “a language” in both situations, here it would be better to say “the”, since you’re talking about a specific language (the one that the reader is learning), not just any random language. “When you learn” is technically ok, but it would take some adjusting of the sentence and would be talking about time. So it would be saying that when you’re learning something (likely a language), it’s good to describe situations in a certain language. “That you’re learning” is more natural and more likely for this situation, as it specifies what language people should be speaking in to describe a language.
This is useful, as you learn a hugelarge number of words and construction and, along with how to construct sentences... it It is also difficult, so you would want to stop thinkthinking about situationsituations which don't giveallow you ato sleep.
You need a connecting word (so “as”) at the beginning. “Huge number” is ok, but I think “large number” sounds a little better. You can’t quantify “construction” with “number of”, so you would need to adjust the sentence a little. It sounds better to start a new sentence because otherwise it would be getting a little too long. “Also” was used to replace “and” in the new sentence instead of starting it with “and”. “Would want” sounds a bit better than just “want” by itself. If “situation” was to be kept in its singular form, you would need an article. For example, you could say “a situation” or “the situation in mind”. In this case, “don’t” would be changed to “doesn’t”. However, I think my suggestion sounds more natural than doing this. You wouldn’t really say “give (someone) a sleep”. I think the more natural version would be “allow (someone) to sleep”, given that I understood it correctly. You also wouldn’t really say “a sleep”, as it’s not countable unless you mean it in the sense of “a night”. For example, sometimes you would see “2 sleeps until Christmas”, which would mean “2 nights until Christmas”. However, this wouldn’t be said commonly, or in more formal situations.
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Good job! I like the idea and I agree! Sometimes I like trying to think in French, but usually it’s the exact same phrase over and over again (the translation of “I want to sleep” or “I’m very tired”). Maybe I should start actually trying to describe situations in French though because that would probably be more helpful than saying the exact same (and really simple) phrase over and over again.
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I can dream a lot.
Now even, there areis even a terminterm for such as delusional dreamydreaming.
? Is that what you are trying to say? I'm not sure what a "termin" is
I claim that I invent howcame up with a way to stor overthinkstop overthinking about some situationsituations.
You need describe the situation ofin the language when you learnare learning!
This is useful, because you can learn a huge number of words and construction and... it is difficult, so you want to stop thinkthinking about the situation which don't give you athat disturbs your sleep.
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Now even there areis even a termin such asterm (for this): delusional dreamydreams.
I claim that I invent howcreated a way to stor overthinkstop overthinking about some situationcertain situations.
"Invent" is usually used for physical things, or things that you can use. It's used in a few other ways, too, but "created" is more general and to me sounds more natural.
You need describe the situation of language when you learn!
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This I'm not sure what you mean to say :(
This is useful, you learn a huge number of words and constructionconstructions, and... it is difficult, so you want to stop think about situationsituations which don't giveput you ato sleep.
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I'm not sure if this is exactly what you wanted to say, but I did my best 🫡 I'm happy you found this method!
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I can dream a lot.
Now even there are a termin such as term "delusional dreamy".
I claim that I inventinvented how to storstop overthink about some situationsituations.
You need describe the situation ofin the language when you learnare learning!
This is useful, you learn a huge number of words and construction and... it is difficult, so you want to stop thinkthinking about the situation which don't givebecause you acan't get any sleep.
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This is an amazing and hilarious idea!! Great job!
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In general, capitalize the first letter of each word. There are a few exceptions. For example, if "to" is not the first word, don't capitalize it.
I can dream a lot, but there is a thing called "delusional dreaming" that I need to be more mindful of.
Combined this sentence with the next sentence to make it clearer about the relationship between your "dreaming a lot" and "delusional dreaming".
Now even there are a termin such as delusional dreamy.
Removed this sentence and moved it with the previous sentence.
I claim thatthink I inventknow how to stor overthinkstop overthinking about some situationsituations.
You need to describe the situation ofin a language whenthat you learnare learning!
This is useful, since you learn a huge numberlot of words and construction andas well as sentence building... it It is difficult, however, so you want toshould stop thinkthinking about the situation which don't giveat some point; otherwise, it won't let you a sleep.
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I hope these corrections didn't deviate (or move away) from the original meanings of these sentences, especially for the last one. If it did, I apologize in advance. Otherwise, great tip! I'll be sure to use it at some point.
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