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My favourite TV show: The Office
I don't know if english native people like The Office TV show, but for me is the most funny tv show ever. Basically the story is about a Office that sell Paper, and each episode has our central story. The characters have defined personalities and the protagonist, called Michael Scott (the Manager of the office) is completely insane.
Sometimes when I watch The Office I need to pause, because the secondhand emarasment is immense.
I also watch the TV Show in English, is a good thing to study the language.
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Une critique de livre #2
Je sais pas pourquoi j'ai donné quatre étoiles à ce livre parce que je ne me souviens pas l'avais aimé trés bien... cela dit, je pense que je l'ai apprecié plus que la derniére partie. Être une adulte, je reconnais à present que l'écriture de l'autrice n'est pas trés raffinée et il y avais beaucoup de choses que je n'ai supportais pas, notamment à nouveau le manque d'édition, il n'avait pas besoin d'étre si long. Les romances sont affreuses avec certaines des plus clichés dialogues que je jamais lus. Il y a beaucoup d'explication mais presque pas révélation par des personnages. Toutes ces choses ont fait le livre trés difficile à finir. Ils n'ont pas mes seules plaintes (l'autrice pense clairement que les filles et les femmes sont trop emotionelles, par example), mais je dois passer à d'autres choses.
Je dirais qu'il y a plusieurs aspects que ça me plaît toujours: la histoire du méchant (ma plus grande faiblesse), le journal du prince, le twist à la fin parce que je comprends maintenant pourquoi s'est passé, mais géneralement je pense que la structure et l'intrigue de ce livre étais trés désordonne.
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Mis mascotas.
¡Tengo muchas mascotas! Me encanta mis mascotas.
Un de mis mascotas es un caballo. Se llama "Buckshot". El es una raza de caballos llamada "Paint". El es muy colorido- tiene un ojo marrón y un ojo azul, tiene un cuerpo blanco con parches marrón, tiene una melena blanco con un poco de negro, y una cola marrón.
El es moderadamente grande. Le encanta comida y comer. El es muy codicioso. Pero el es mi amigo.
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Was ist in dem Packet?!?
Es ist ein grau und regnerisch Morgen in meiner Stadt.
Ich offene meinen Augen und stehe meinem Bett auf. Durch meines Fenster, kann ich nicht mehr dann zwei Meter sehen und ich frage mich, wenn die Sonne noch einmal schienen wollen. Plötzlich, höre ich irgendetwas von einen anderen Platz dem Haus. Ich glaube das etwa auf der Tür sein. Wer können es sein?
Ich bekomme meine Hose und ein blaues T-Shirt, und ich läufe unter der Treppe zu der Tür. Wann sehe ich aus dem kleinen Fenster an der Tür, ich kann nicht niemals sehen. Ich offene die Tür und unter mich ein große, braune Paket setzen. An die Wände von das Paket Buchstabe sein. Sie sagen, "Für Brad Pitt, erinnere was die seiben unheilige dinge sein? Liebe, John Doe"
Ich habe viel angst und mein Herz trammelte. John Doe...ich kenne das Namen. Aber ich habe für viel, viel Jahren nicht gedenken über John Doe. Ich glaube das er getoten hat.
Plötzlich, ich frage mich, wo ist mein Frau? Warum war sie nicht mit mir ins Bett?
Ich siehe um das Paket und murmelte mich, "Was ist in dem Paket??" Nur die Regen antwortet...
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El espeleísmo.
Hoy leí sobre un acidente de espeleísmo que me impactó mucho. Un grupo descendía a un sistema de cuevas muy estrechas, pero navegables. Tres personas decidieron dejar el grupo para hollar un paseo angosto con un giro al final. Ya era una mala idea dejar a los otros, pero el error más grave sucidió luego, cuando un miembro de esta compañía temeraria entró a un área que no estaba en su mapa. Se encontró en un pasillo cuyo sola continuación era una fisura muy estrecha. Creyendo que la fisura era el giro, entró de cabeza. No hubo ningun giro allá, y el hombre se atascó boca abajo. No puedo imaginar el dolor y el temor que debería haber sentido: paredes de piedra apretando a su cuerpo, el aíre limitado, la sangre subiendo a su cabeza y las piernas quedadas sin suministro de sangre. Un equipo de rescatistas que venió para liberarlo creó un sistema de extración muy sofisticado, pero él falló, empujando el hombre aún más bajo. Murió veintiocho horas después de atascarse.
Es que, nos hemos medio acostumbrado a ver muertes por violencia en la TV, mientras situaciones poco occuridas como esta parecen especialmente antinaturales, macabras y totalmente evitables.
Saben lo que se siente cuando se cae el alma a los pies después de hacer algo estupido? Esto debe ser el epítome de esa sensación. Por otro lado, la mejor parte del espeleísmo es que no tenemos que hacerlo.
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Teacher, your announce was too delay...
Today, I felt very cold because of an accident...In the first place, my teacher told us that today's class was held by myself at my home. Usual class starts from 9 a.m., so I started to study from that time, and I continued it to around half 10 o'clock. After that, I checked Teams (app's name)'s announcement and I was very surprised. It said that "Today, we'll have a class online"! The email, to surprised, arrived at the time which will be 9 o'clock in 2minutes. I can't believe that it really occurred...The announcement was too late...
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The reason of study English
The reason of study English.
I was enginior to machines of foreign for some years.
At that time, I sent mails to helpdesk at manufacturer in English. I often used English. And I studied English. (I didn't go well.)
After that I changed my job. I don't have to use English.
I Felt it was a waste of my English skill, so I restart to study English.
I hope this comes in handy someday.
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My personality
I have two side of personality, like a lot of poeple I think. In my private life I'm introvert, I don't now how do conversation, talk about what.. I often can't be myself and i need time for be 100% unstudied. The other side of my personality is very extrovet, I work like waitress so I need to talk and empathize with customers and i love that because il talk with people that I will never see again, I can be whoever I want. It's a good 50/50 even though I would like to be like that in my private life.
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TOEFL Writing Challenge No.1
<Question>
A new poetry magazine has asked its readers for submissions, and you decided to submit two of your poems. However, you had a problem using the online submission form, and you are not certain that your submissions were received.
Write an email to the editor of the magazine. In your email, do the following
・Tell the director what you like about the magazine
・Describe the problem you experienced
・Ask about the status of your submissions
Write as much as you can and complete the sentences.(100-150 Words)
<My answer>
Dear Team Sunshine Poetry Magazine,
I am writing because of the problem I experienced when I submitted my poems for your magazine.
As I submitted my poems online, I had a problem using the online submission form. Because of that problem, I am not sure if I was able to sucessfully send my poems.
It would be very sad if they were not sent, as I really love your magazine. For me, your magazine your explanations of the poems including backgrounds of them hepls a lot enjoying them.
I would be very greatful if you could check the status of my poems, and please let me know if you received my poems correctly.
Thank you very much,
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Diary
I'm now watching the Green Book. Since it's the last class before test, our teacher shows a movie to us. I've watched this movie before and I love this movie so much. What impresses me most is that Christmas eve and the warm light on the streets, I think I can remember that scenery forever.
Additionally, I got some positive feedback today so I'm happy.
Keep going, Shirley!!!!!!!!!!!
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