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Brainrot
Social media is declining our intelligence and critical thinking abilities?
Lately, I have been watching different videos and listening podcasts that talk about this. Social media is a huge community to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole world, and at the same time those are the main problems. We do not have patience anymore, we want everything reduced in a 30 sec tik tok video.
We are no longer interested in youtube videos or quiet movies because we are not able to pay attention more than one minute without scrolling through our fyp. Also, maybe is something that just happens to me, but i can not read consciously like before. I try to read 30 pages, but it is difficult to understand all the letters and words, my brain just turns off during the process.
Going more deeply, human beings are losing their ability to love and understand each other. Nowadays, we live in a violent world where everyone is facing their own problems and does not have time to be empathetic or to worry about others. We want all, but now, not later. Quickly.
We do not want to fight or try anymore, if something does not happen like we planned it just not worthy of our attention.
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A Day Trip by the Shinkansen 新幹線での日帰り旅行
I took the bullet train this past weekend since I had some errands to run in a nearby prefecture. It was about a 90-minute trip.
On the way there, I sat in a non-reserved seat. It was so crowded that I barely managed to find a seat. After that, everything went smoothly. I had some local food at the station building, took a bus to my destination, and finished what I had to do.
On the way back, the non-reserved car was much less crowded, so I had no trouble finding a seat.
Although I’m the kind of person who finds traveling more of a hassle than a pleasure, it was still exciting to visit a new place, try food I don’t usually eat, and ride an unfamiliar bus line. At the same time, it was so exhausting that on the way back I popped a piece of chocolate into my mouth. Otherwise, I felt like I might have fainted.
I’ll be taking the bullet train again next month. This time it will be a longer ride, so I’m planning to get a reserved seat. I would also like to enjoy a meal on the train.
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Las cosas que perdimos en el fuego
Mi amiga de Argentina me ha prestado su libro que se llama ‘las cosas que perdimos en el fuego’ es una colección de historias cortas. Ayer empecé a leer el libro y la primera historia se llama ‘el chico sucio’. Se trata de una mujer que vive el barrio Constitución en Buenos Aires, sus padres creen que está loca porque vive en ese barrio peligroso pero á ella le gusta vivir ahí. Sus vecinos son una madre y su hijo que son pobre. Una noche el chico llamaba a la puerta de la mujer y decía que tenía hambre, la mujer le daba comida y le compraba un helado. Cuando regresaron de la heladería la mama del ‘chico sucio’ fue muy enojada con la mujer porque no sabía que hizo ella con su hijo.
Algunas días después la policía ha encontrado a un chico matado/muerto. La mujer pensaba que era el chico sucio y se sentía mal porque no le cuidaba. Al final fue otro chico y …. no he leído más
Me parece muy interesante aunque todavía no he acabado con el capítulo.
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My Day
Today was the end of the week end so I went to high school and I saw my friends. I started with a spanish class and I had a test. I think I will have a great grade because I learnt my lessons and it was quite simple. After I had sports class but my teacher wasn't here. So, with a friend, we wanted in the gym (to work out) because he went there for 2 weeks. But we couldn't because I had to be 16 and I am fifteen. And the worse in that is that I will be sixteen tomorrow. But I'm going to sign up in another gym close to my friend's gym so we will can go there together.
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Turkish Language
As a native Turkish, I sometimes have difficulty explaning Turkish Language's detail to foreigner that what part of it is easy and what part of it is difficult. I will share this video with anyone who wants to learn Turkish's detail. I am so happy to see a non-Turkish evaluating this language. Additionally I want to point out another matter. Due to the difference between Turkish language and European Language, Turks have difficulty learning these languages. Because There is no articles and gender of words such as Italian, French, German etc and we, Turks, cannot understand how the articles are used and determined the correct articles by words. As far as I remember there is no specific rule what word is masculine or feminine.
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Richard Löwenherz 1
Heinrich der Jüngere war schon storben, weshalb Richard Löwenherz, der der dritte Sohn von Heinrich II. und der beliebteste von Eleonore war, den Thron bestieg.
Er unternahm mit Philipp August den dritten Kreuzzug. Philipp versuchte Richard und seine Schwester zu verheiraten. Richard zustimmte aber nicht dieser Ehe.
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My Introduction and day off
Hello. How about today?
I’ll introduce myself and explain my day off.
First, I work as a Japanese government officer. I started it 3years ago. It’s very challenging for me, but I think that my work is highly rewarding! That’s because I can work in national government and feel dedication for my native and people. Honestly, sometimes my work that gives numberless hard tasks is exhausting to me. However, in this condition, I’m reminded to me that my work is helpful and informative for my country and people! Thanks to that, I continue to fight!
Second, let me explain my day off.
I usually spent my day off with my friends. For example, coming to drink or browse used clothing shops.
On the other hand, l like to stay home. It can be relax and care my body. I think it needs for me to do next week’s works.
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The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming. It’s one of China’s traditional festivals.
I don’t know the origin of this festival. I only know some of its traditions.
The festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month in the Chinese calendar. This date usually falls in the middle of September in the solar calendar.
This festival is a time for people to visit their relatives, such as their maternal and paternal grandparents, uncles and aunts.
An indispensable gift when visiting relatives is mooncakes — a type of pastry made from wheat flour, nuts, dried fruits and sugar.
I don’t like eating mooncakes because they are too sweet. I always feel cloying after eating them.
Nevertheless, mooncakes have already become a symbol of this festival; without them, it wouldn’t feel like the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Thus, about one or two months before the festival, factories start producing mooncakes, which are then delivered to markets for sale. The prices of mooncakes also vary widely.
Every year for this festival, I don’t buy many mooncakes. I only buy a few high-quality ones for my family to taste.
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L’automne est arrivé
L’automne est arrivé, les station des buses sont de nouveau pleins d’élèves. Les journées s’écourtent. Les feuilles tombent. On est dans le neuvième mois de l’année. Comme c’est difficile d’accepter le passage de l’été. Les journées sont longes pleins du soleil, quand on se lève, le soleil est en haut, et même à neuf heures la lumières du jour est toujours visible.
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Mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätze
Mit der Zunahme der Urbanisierung und der Entstehung verschiedener Umweltprobleme stellt sich die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen. Diese Maßnahme bringt viele Vorteile mit sich. Als ein Vorteil lässt sich die Verbesserung der Luftqualität nennen. Außerdem führt die Schaffung mehr Grünflächen zur Senkung der Temperatur. Dies lässt sich dadurch erklären, dass Grünflächen Kohlendioxid absorbieren, was im Laufe der Zeit zu einer Reduktion der Treibhausgasemissionen führt und deswegen die durchschnittliche Temperatur sinkt. Ein weiterer positiver Aspekt wäre der Lebensraum für Tiere, wodurch die Biodiversität zunimmt. Darüber hinaus könnten mehr Grünflächen der Gesundheit dadurch förderlich sein, dass sie Menschen zum Sport oder Spielen sowie Verbringung der Zeit mit ihren Familien motivieren. Trotz der Vorteile der Grünfläche ist es zu berücksichtigen, dass in der heutigen Zeit das Bedürfnis nach Mobilität kontinuierlich steigt. Viele Menschen sind auf Autos angewiesen, weswegen der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration der Menschen auslösen kann. Außerdem kann dieser Mangel dazu führen, dass es eilig habende Menschen die Straßenregeln nicht mehr einhalten.
Die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen, lässt sich also nicht leicht beantworten. Einerseits fördert die Schaffung der Grünflächen die Gesundheit und das allgemeine Wollbefinden, andererseits könnte der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration und Wut der Menschen auslösen.Ein Vorschlag wäre die Förderung alternativer Verkehrsmittel wie Fahrrad ,Bahn, damit man sowohl die Probleme der Mangel an Parkplätzen lösen kann, als auch mehr Grünfläche schaffen kann.
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Dilbilgisini ihmal etmemek
Haftada bir kez, Türkçe Türk arkadaşla öğrenirim. "Yedi İklim" adlı bir kıtab kullanırım. Bu kitap kötü değil, sadece dilbilgisini öğretmez! Elbette mesele değil, çünkü bu arkadaş bana grameri açıklayabilir, sadece bana göre, Türkçe dilbilgisisiz öğretmek problematik. Nasıl birisi bir dili anlayabilir, eğer çalısmasını anlamasa? Cümleler ezberden, makine gibi tekrarlamak" "anlamak" anlamına gelmez. *
Aslında, tüm diller öğrenmesi için dilbilgisini ihmal etmemeyi tavsiye ediyorum, özellikle Türkçe için, cünkü Türkçe yapısı Hind-Avrupalı'kinden çok farklı — örneğin, ekleri kullanbilirmek gerçekten esas.
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Mi primera entrada
Hola todos!
Hoy escribo mi primera entrada en LangCorrect.
Yo estoy aprendiendo español durante un año.
Uso cuatros materiales diferentes para aprender.
Uso Duolingo para aprender palabras nuevas.
Hablo con mi maestra de español, Laura, en Preply cada miercoles durante una hora.
Recientemente, empezo usar "Dreaming Spanish" para practicar mi comprensión auditiva.
Y ahora, empezo usar esta plataforma.
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Un stent
Peter n’a que 43 ans. Il est marié et a deux petits garçons. Peter était en bonne santé, ni gros ni trop lourd. Il est travailleur indépendant et j’imagine qu’il travaille de longues heures. Ayant une jeune famille, je me doute bien qu’il a beaucoup de temps de soit se détendre soit faire des exercices.
La semaine dernière, il s’est plaint d’une douleur au bras. Sa femme a immédiatement appelé l’ambulance. Peter a été rapidement transporté à l’hôpital. Aux urgences, le médecin a prescrit de nombreux examens car il soupçonnait que c’était une crise cardiaque.
Bien que le résultat de la majorité de ces examens soit négatif, le médecin n’était pas satisfait et il a prescrit un autre examen, plus sophistiqué. Le résultat était que Peter avait deux artères bouchées et le chirurgien a posé deux stents.
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