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Spontaneous writing
I was born in the middle of the year.
In few month, I will be one.
One year on this earth.
I don't know why and how I arrived there, surround by all these strange people.
In particular this lady with her big blue eyes and this man with his deep voice.
The lady talk to me everyday, while I just want to stay alone with my thoughts.
She said "Mama", so I presume it's her name.
Mine would be "little poopy", maybe.
She smell like flowers with milk, strange mix, but not really unpleasant.
The man have the face cover by fur, like the dog.
I don't really like when he kiss me, because it scratch my skin.
People said we have the same eyes, but I hope I wouldn't have the same hair.
Sometimes, he changes his voice and makes funny noises.
I think he's a good guy.
He call me "buddy".
Maybe THAT is my name.
Last day, a woman with the same mama's eyes gave me a teddy bear, but I didn't like her unbereable smell, too aggressive for my little nose.
And for her, my name is "sweetie".
Sorry but.... WHAT IS MY NAME?
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J'écris des phrases au hasard.
Ce n'est plus nécessaire que tu te rendes au bureau demain matin.
Le client vient d'appeler pour m'en informer que...
Son camion est tombé en panne sur l'autoroute.
Avant de ta rentrée, je m'étais déjà douché.
Alors, la salle de bain est maintenant disponible. Elle est à ta disposition.
Si ta voiture tombe en panne, tu devras appeler l'assistance routière tout de suite.
N'aie pas peur ! Je serai là dès que possible.
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Physical books or E-books?
Definitely physical books.
During my childhood, my mother had a lot of books and she gave me her passion about them.
We had a lot of different books in our toilets, and I spend a few hours sat on there only to read my mother's books.
She bought me a lot of comics when I was younger, and my first "real" novel for my ten years old.
It was "Les Fourmis" by Bernard Werber.
Now, it is old, dirty with a lot of damages, because I took it with me every time, but it has two stories: the story wrote inside, and the story I engraved on.
All of my books have two stories.
I know a lot of people don't be agree with that, but I love to damage my books, corne the pages, write inside...
It gives them a soul.
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C'est moi ou ce site Internet plante souvent?
J'utilise ce site depuis quelques semaines et j'adore pouvoir pratiquer mon français et recevoir des corrections, ainsi comme pouvoir aider d'autres gens. Cependant j'ai repéré comme dans nombreuses occasions, le site plante quand je suis en train de l'utiliser. Je pense que cela se passe plus probablement lorsque je prends du temps pour rédiger mes textes ou mes corrections. C'est particulièrement énervant quand j'essaie de corregir un texte long, car après le plantage, tout ce que j'avais écrit est perdu et je dois recommencer. Je me mets vraiment en colère. Je suis arrivé au point de rédiger mes textes dans un éditeur externe et les copier-coller au dernier moment. De cette façon je n'ai pas besoin de les rédiger de nouveau si le site plante et tout est effacé. Pour le moment je me debrouille mais c'est vraiment gênant de l'utiliser comme cela. Si cela continue, peut-être que je arrête de l'utiliser. J'espère que cela n'arrive pas, mais je ne l'exclus pas. Cette situation est assez déplorable.
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The lesson is learned
Today morning I had an interesting but also a strange experience.
I had an interview with 3 resresentatives of big and famous company.
During the interview, I suddenly forgot all the words and ended up sitting silently.
It was frustrating and made me feel unprepared.
It was already two or three times when I was speaking in Italian or German because I know those languages rather bad, especially for an important business talk.
But I have never felt this way before speaking in English.
I feel frustrated now because I wanted to show my best myself but in reality I showed that I unideal and "lost my face " in front of others.
I think it happened because I was too nervous and overthinking.
Next time, I try to stay calm by taking deep breaths.
I will also remind myself that it’s okay to pause and collect my thoughts before answering.
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Cómo escribir un descargo de responsabilidad
He estado pensando que escribir posts en otros sitios, pero esos sitios no son para corregir posts. Así que pienso que escribir un descargo de responsabilidad sería una buena idea. ¿Es las siguientes frases adecuado para un descargo de responsabilidad?
Descargo de responsabilidad: Estoy estudiando español, así que este post podría haber errores. Si quieres corregirlo, ¡sería muy apreciada! Puedes contactar conmigo en [nombre del sitio].
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La memoria es un engaño
“La memoria no es un archivo fiel del pasado, sino una narración en constante revisión que hacemos para poder seguir adelante.”
No me acuerdo de lo que me había olvidado. Me quedo en el olvido por el momento robado por el tiempo. Por lo tanto, nuestra memoria es engañosa: como si fuesen hilos, se desvanecen sin dejar rastro.
Si fuese poco, la mente es nuestra manta de seguridad. Por ejemplo, una niña que había perdido sus padres, se aferran a una realidad poco realista para no enfrentarse con una bola de agua fría. Igualmente, las parejas se niegan a aceptar sus puntos débiles, tiñendo los momentos mundanos con tonos de rosa en vez de aceptar el vacío que se queda.
Puesto que somos los protagonistas de nuestras propias historias, escribimos el guion que nos hace sentirnos validados. Con cada revisión, nos vuelve menos culpables para que tengamos la razón. La narración es lo que nos complace, nos hipnotiza, nos sostiene- un fin sin fin en la trama que se llama vida.
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5.1.2026: Mode als Ausdruck meiner Persönlichkeit
Jetzt schaue ich die Mode von Ellie-Jean Royden auf YouTube an, weil ich mich mit meiner geraden Figur femininer kleide. Meine drei Stilbegriffe sind feminin, professionell und sinnlich. Zum Beispiel kleide ich Rollkragenpullover, Faltenröcke, Blazer und Blusen mit V-Ausschnitt oder Herzausschnitt.
Heute Nachmittag kleide ich einen Rollkragenpullover, einen Minirock aus Wolle mit goldenen Knöpfen und schwarze, mit Fleece gefütterte Strumpfhosen. Ich bin glücklicher mit meinem Outfit, zumal ich zeige, wer ich als Person bin.
Normalerweise spreche ich nicht über die Mode, weil jemand gesagt hat, dass die Mode oberflächlich ist. Allerdings ist die Mode bedeutungsvoll, da sie eine Kunstform ist. Zum Beispiel habe ich über Farblehre, Farbjahreszeiten, Stilbegriffe und Körperformen gelernt.
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Teamwork In The kitchen
Years ago, when my wife and I were both working we seldom cooked ourselves, we usually ate outside or ordered online. But since five years ago my wife quote her job to take care of my daughter and we began to cook ourselves. Slowly my wife's cooking skills and our teamwork have been getting better and better. I prepare the ingredients and wash the dishes, and her duty is cooking and setting our desk. We really have a great chemistry in the kitchen.
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Four day
Today I listen about the influencers and your influence in the politic issues.
I learn that in Nigeria the 70% of population is a young people and the rest of person is a old adult .
In this moment I am the searching in spotify something easy podcast for practicing my English. Acept recomdations.
I feel my reading and comprehension a little more natural but my listen not get but I tell myself "I can do it"
Jan. 8, 2026
Ser libre de prejuicios
Para aprender una lengua extranjera, tienes que ser libre de prejuicios porque todas las lenguas tienen cosas raras. Por ejemplo, inglés tiene muchas pronunciaciones raras y ortografía que es muy difícil y incongruente. Español tiene un montón de formas verbales y tres tiempos subjuntivos. Si quieres aprender una lengua, tienes que aceptar estos.