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An old friend
Sofia · learning English
Alana reminded me of Luna, who used to be my best friend I used to have named Luna.
Not wrong, and you hear it in speech, but in writing it comes off a little clunky.
Moras silvestres
Mia · learning Spanish
Esta mañana, dos de mis hermanas y yo fuimos de caza para morerasrecolección por moras.
Animals are hunted ("cazar"); fruit and vegetables are gathered ("recolectar").
Mes débuts en français
Tom · learning French
J'ai commencé à étudier le français quequand j'avais 12 ans.
The time clause needs the conjunction "quand" (when), not "que".
Deutsche Nachrichten
Marco · learning German
Die Nachrichten hathaben gesagt, dass das in Deutschland nicht immer so in Deutschland ist.
Unlike the English word "the news," the German equivalent "die Nachrichten" is actually plural.
暑い日
Emma · learning Japanese
自分が冷める身体を冷やすためにアイスクリームを買いました。
"冷やす" is to cool something down; "冷める" is when something cools off by itself.
Real corrections from public journal entries. Names changed.
こんにちは · Bonjour · 안녕하세요 · Hola · مرحبا · Olá
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