Opinion Essay 27/04. I'd really appreciate the help :)

Small nuance, I would really vs I really. I would kind of gives a future sort of feeling. Like how we will be giving you help by editing.

Giving gifts for celebrations or on important dates is a practice that's very common in a lot of places in/ around the world.

On important dates, add the on. Small grammar edits.

I believe that this activity is not always an wasteful expense, and it has a/ can possess great emotional significance.

Maybe an adjective to describe expense, because expenses can be a good thjng too.

This practice is frequent toly practiced when celebrateing anniversaries or birthdays, and presents are part of theextending ones congratulation.s.

Gifts may not be material as well/ In addition, gifts aremay not only be material, and do not always require spending a lot of money.

Some grammar edits, alternative ways to write.

He wrote many nice things on this letter that I consider it to be one of the best gifts I have ever received.

Grammar again

Furthermore, there is a way to avoid unhappiness with gifts/ situations which one receives gifts that they did not like, and it is asking people ofor their preferences or giving them money instead.

If the individual is very complicated, giving money instead ifmay be preferable, since they can spend it better.on what they want.

To sum up/ As a whole, I think that presents are essential in celebrationg others because they have an emotional significance beyond the money it cost.how much they cost/ the amount of money put into them.

Alternate expressions.

Moreover, asking people of their preferences can avoid unhappiness after receiving gifts, instead of not giving them anything at all.

Giving gifts for celebrations or important dates is a practice very common in a lot of places inmilestones is a very common practice in many places all over the world.

However, many people feel that giving presents is usually alike waste ofing money on things that people do not like or want.

I got rid of "people" to avoid using it twice in the same sentence

I believe that this activity is not always an expense, andgiving gifts is not always a waste; on the contrary, it has a great emotional significance.

Firstly, giving gifts is aIt is a good way to show how much people matter tof each other.

Try not to say "firstly" if there is no "secondly"

This practice is frequent tocommon when celebrateing anniversaries orand birthdays, and presents are part of theit's just another way to express congratulations.

In addition, gifts are not onecessarily material,istic and do not always require spending a lot of money.

During ourAt the three-month mark in our relationship anniversary, my boyfriend wrote two letters and let me choose one.

An "anniversary" is a yearly thing. Many people (even native speakers) use it incorrectly. It's a common "accepted" mistake, but it's still not correct

HIn this letter, he wrote so many nicesweet things on this letter that I consider it to be one of the best gifts I have ever received.

Furthermore, there is a way to avoid unhdisappoiness with gifts, and it is asking people of their preferencestment by asking people beforehand what they would like or giving them money instead.

It is also a way to show the effort put into giving the gifyou are thinking of what they want.

If the individual is very complicated's preferences are very niche, giving them money instead ifmight be preferable, since they can spend it betterchoose to spend it however they want.

ToIn sum up, I think that presents are essential in celebrations because they have an emotional significance beyond the money itmonetary costs.

Moreover, asking people of their preferences can avoid unhdisappoinesstment after receiving gifts, instead of not giving them at all.

"Disappointment" is associated with receiving gifts you don't want. I think "unhappiness" might be too extreme. I hope I never cause someone unhappiness with a gift!

However, many people feel that giving presents is usually a waste of money on things that people do not like or wanteople things they don't like or want is a waste of money.

This practice is frequently used to celebrate anniversaries or birthdays, and. Giving presents areis part of the congratulelebration.

He wrote so many nice things on this letter that I consider it one of the best gifts I have ever received.

Furthermore, there is a way to avoid unhappiness with gifts, and it is asking people oif theiry preferences or giving them money instead gifts or money.

If the individual is very complicated, giving money instead ifs preferable, since they can spend it better.

To sum up, I think that presents are essential in celebrations because they have an emotional significance beyond the money ithey cost.

This is a great sentence, good Job!