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Scarllet_farther in English

Bread Making Failed

My daughter said that she wanted to make some bread by herself this morning, I encouraged her, and all of us were looking forward to enjoying the fresh bread. We bought an electric home use oven which is 50cm long, 50cm wide and 60cm high. We have never baked bread before because we don't know how to make it. We prepared some essential ingredients like flour, butter, egg, and yeast for her. She did that hard and seriously. We were not surprised to see the final result this evening, you can see the picture I attached here below. Yes, the first tray of bread she made failed. The bread can be eaten but not soft. The key mistake is probably due to not fully covering the cough, so proof dough failed. We will be doing better next time I believe.

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Dec 04

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celestem in German

Ein Tag in Granada

Granada ist eine Stadt, die im Süden von Spanien liegt. In Granada kann man heute an vielen Stellen die Geschichte des alten arabischen Königreichs, das von 8. bis 14. Jahrhundert in Spanien war. Ich zeige euch die interessanten Orte, um einer Tolle Tag zu haben! 1. Alhambra. Dieser alte Palast wurde im Jahr 976 gebaut. Es ist eines der bedeutendsten Beispiele von islamischer Kunst in Europa. Die Alhambra ist eine der meistbesuchten Sehenswürdigkeiten Europas. Man kann heute einfach Alhambra besuchen. Man kann dort vom Zentrum Granadas laufen. Der Eintritt kostet über 10-15 €, und es lohnt sich! 2. Stadtviertel Albaicin. Es liegt gegenüber dem Alhambra und man kann die großartige Aussicht von Alhambra genießen. Man soll unbedingt spazieren in diesem Viertel gehen. Es gibt verschiedene Restaurants, kleine Geschäfte, Kunstladen und Musiker auf der Straße. Perfekt nach dem Alhambra besucht, um eine schöne Abend zu verbringen. 3. Stadtviertel Sacromonte. Es liegt im Norden von Granada und man kann zu Fuß oder mit dem Bus dorthin gehen. Es gibt die bekannte Sacromonte Kirche, wo man wirklich flamenco atmen! Es ist der Geburtsort der Flamenco-Sängern wie Enrique Morente. 4. Die Kathedrale. Die Granadas Kathedrale liegt im zentrum von Granada. Die Überraschung ist total: man wartet nicht auf die Kathedrale, wann man im Zentrum läuft! Unbedingt kann man auch besichtigen. Der Eintritt kostet 8 €.

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Dec 04

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Scarllet_farther in English

Google Pixel Phones Banned

Xianyu is the biggest second-hand online trading platform in C (country name), at least from yesterday, if you input keywords like "google phone", "google pixel", and "pixel phone", you will get no response. That is to say, the trading of any items which include keywords Google or Pixel is banned now on the Xianyu. I tested on another platform Taobao, which only blocks Google concerned products, and can find Pixel concerned products. Probably Google Pixel Phone will soon be banned to sell on Taobao.

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Dec 04

1 min read

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Romany in French

La clôture anti-lapin

La clôture anti-lapin La semaine dernière, j’ai regardé le célèbre film australien, « The Rabbit Proof Fence ». Le film est adapté d’un roman écrit par l’auteure, Doris Pilkington en 1996. C’est une vraie histoire d’une famille indigène qui a eu lieu au début du XXème siècle. Le roman suit l’expérience de trois jeunes filles qui s’échappent d’un camp gouvernemental et marchent 1 600 kms pour être réunis avec leurs parents. Elles suivent la clôture anti-lapin qui a été construite par le gouvernement en 1901. La construction de cette clôture de protection contre les lapins, est une autre histoire assez bizarre. Construite dans l’état d’Australie-Occidentale, il s’agit d’une clôture de barbelés ( barbed wire), avec une longue de 3 256 kms, allant du nord au sud. En effet, elle devise l’État en deux parties. Le but était de garder les lapins sauvages qui étaient des nuisances majeures, hors des terres agricoles. Le gouvernement de l’époque avait pensé que cela empêcherait en même temps, des dingos, des kangourous et des émues. Les fermiers les détestaient puisque ces animaux détruisaient régulièrement leurs cultures. Malheureusement, cette clôture était très inefficace et n’avait pas résolu le problème. Cette histoire m’a intéressée beaucoup parce que les lapins ne sont pas indigènes en Australie : ils ont été introduits par les anciens colons anglais. Lorsque je me suis renseigné plus profondément, j’ai appris une autre histoire assez bizarre. Apparemment, en 1859, M. Thomas Austin avait relâché 24 lapins sauvages sur sa propriété. Il avait voulu les chasser et les tuer comme un sport. Évidement, M. Austin n’avait pas réussi car les lapins s’étaient multipliés en si grand nombre que de nos jours, ils sont des ravageurs de bon nombre de cultures.

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Dec 04

2 min read

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Jack in English

A Message

Hi, Lagan, let me tell you a story. The evening before yesterday when I was going to pick my granddaughter up from kindergarten, I found I couldn’t start my car, so I had to call a taxi. I thought the reason may be the battery because it happened several times that I couldn't start my car because the battery was running out of energy. I had the battery changed, but I still couldn't start the engine. The mechanic didn't find anything wrong. After he did a computer test, afterwards he doubted if the car was running out of gasoline, so I added 230 rmb of gasoline, but it didn't work. The mechanic said he couldn't figure out what the problem was at the moment. He told me he would fix my car at night when he was not busy. Now I am at home. I don't know if they have already fixed my car or not. I forgot to ask for their phone numbers. I will go to work tomorrow morning, and the car fixing store is right on my way to work. I think by then I will know.

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Dec 04

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lethanhhang in English

Please review my essay.

It is easier for wealthy people to maintain good health than it is for people who do not have large amounts of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There is a widespread notion that it is more difficult for poor people to maintain good health compared to the wealthy. I completely agree. First, healthy food is often expensive, so the poor tend to opt for cheap alternatives, which can damage their health. For example, many people with a low income in Western countries are suffering from being overweight, obesity, and diabetes because they consume a large amount of fast food, which only costs a few dollars, far cheaper than fresh ingredients such as vegetables and fruits. On the other hand, rich people can afford to have a diet that is recommended by a food specialist, allowing them to consume enough vitamins for daily activities and have a healthy body. Similarly, poor people tend not to have the luxury of attending fitness classes to exercise and keep fit, unlike the wealthy. Consequently, they are likely to have a low standard of fitness, which is vulnerable to diseases. Second, medical treatment costs for some illnesses are so expensive that those without high earnings are not able to afford them. As a result, many poor people are left to die of curable diseases. For example, every year, thousands of individuals in many African countries struggle to purchase medicines for mitigating aid symptoms, whose prices are sometimes up to thousands of dollars, and end with early death. Furthermore, rich people can afford monthly medical checking to identify early symptoms of potential illnesses, so they can quickly seek preventative medicines or medical treatments. In conclusion, people who do not have a large amount of money have difficult access to resources that can help them to have good health. I tried to practice writing under the pressure of time with easy questions. Would you mind grading my essays and giving me some suggestions to improve my band?

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Dec 04

2 min read

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lethanhhang in English

Please review my essay.

The diagram illustrates how paper is made and recycled in a manufacturing process. Overall, there are three main stages in the process including seven small steps: first, transforming trees into logs, second, processing them into papers and finally, recycling the used papers. The first stage involves trees being cut down into logs using a saw at a lumber mill. In the second stage, the logs are shipped to a pulping centre, where they are crushed into pulp. The pulp is then brought to a paper-making plant, in which it is passed through a paper press to be turned into paper. Turning to the third stage, after being used and discarded, the paper is transported to a recycling plant by a truck. Subsequently, it is shredded into small pieces by a machine, which are transformed into pulp. Finally, the pulp is brought back to the paper-making plant and processed into paper.

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Dec 04

1 min read

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maymaymay_ in English

Please review my essay.

The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree? Some people advocate art and music should be removed from the school curriculum so children can focus on other subjects that can equip them with the skills needed for the 21st century, such as information technology. I completely disagree. First, one main aim of education is to cultivate and nurture children to be the best version of themselves by maximizing their interests and talents. There are undoubtedly many students who are interested in or possess a talent for art and music but do not have the luxury of taking those classes outside of school. They will be taken the joy away or fail to fully develop their competence if their schools exclude art and music from the curriculum. After adulthood, these students might face working in a field that they are not passionate about or talented in, resulting in poor performance and low chances of professional success. Hence, taking out art and music classes can actually be counterproductive. Second, art and music classes can prepare children with useful skills for their employment prospects just like other subjects. By expressing their thoughts through painting and singing, children can enhance their creative and innovative thinking, which is what most employers seek when hiring. In addition, the notion that artistic skills are of no use and people cannot depend on them to make a living is untrue nowadays. Modern people love entertainment, so they spend a lot of money on games, cartoons, comics, and music. As a result, artists now have abundant ways to earn money. For example, many Tiktokers and Youtubers can attract millions of viewers and gain a lot of money just because they can sing or draw better than average people. In conclusion, schools should provide art and music classes so they can acquire a well-rounded education that allows all children to flourish in their areas of interest or aptitudes and equip them with creativity and artistic skills, which are in high demand in the current entertainment age.

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Dec 04

2 min read

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Bees in Chinese (繁體)

美國小孩子關押 指控犯有殺人罪

據美國媒體,一名10歲男孩子日前被指控犯有一集魯莽殺人罪,現在關押在少管所。該男孩11月21日把母親槍殺。他最初告訴警察他從母親的臥室裡拿到槍,然後把玩槍枝的時候,槍枝走火打中媽媽。男孩的26歲的姐姐立即報了警。但是男孩的姨媽不相信他的話。男孩就承認槍枝不是走火的,他故意朝母親開槍。原因是,媽媽拒絕給他買虛擬現實頭盔。 這個報導讓我又驚訝又難過。孩子怎麼那麼容易地就拿到了槍枝?媽媽沒有槍枝保管箱嗎?更加,男孩的姨媽說他一點都沒哭,一點都沒表現出悔意。那就很奇怪。也許該孩子是精神變態者。

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Dec 04

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