Best childhood memory?
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My best childhood memory is my fireflies. I remember when I was a kid, I often watched fireflies. Sometimes they would come into my room from outside. Sometimes we caught the fireflies and then put them in mosquito nets. I heard that fireflies can only live in clean air. The air in the city is polluted, and that's why you can't see fireflies.
最美好的童年回忆是什么？ 我最美好的童年回忆是萤火虫。 我记得小时候，我经常看萤火虫。 有时它们会从外面飞进我的房间。 有时我们会捉住萤火虫，然后放进蚊帐里。 我听说萤火虫只能生活在洁净的空气中。 城市里的空气很污染，所以看不到萤火虫。
Best childhood memory?
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Even better: "My Best Childhood Memory" OR "What's My Best Childhood Memory?"
My best childhood memory is my fireflies.
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Better/clearer: "My best childhood memories involve fireflies." Since it sounds like you are recounting multiple memories involving fireflies.
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