Self-introduction
This is my first time to write a letter in this web. I'm eighteen. I will go to my university in September 15. I don't have expectation for my university's life,because I worry about relationship
This is my first time to writewriting a letter inon this webwebsite.
I will go to my university inon September 15.
Or: I will start attending (my) university on September 15.
I don't have expectation forany expectations regarding my university'suniversity life, because I worry about relationshiprelationships. (??)
This is my first time to writewriting a letter inon this webwebsite.
Two small things. After "my first time," English uses the -ing form: my first time writing. And for a site we say on this website — "in this web" isn't used.
I will go to mystart university inon September 15.
With a specific date English uses on: on September 15. (in is for a month by itself — in September.) Also, for beginning your studies, start university sounds more natural than go to my university.
I don't have expectationany expectations for my university'suniversity life, because I worryI'm worried about relationshiprelationships.
A few small things. After any, English wants the plural: any expectations. University life works as a set phrase — my university's life sounds like the university itself has a life. Put a space after the comma. And for how you feel right now, I'm worried about... fits better than I worry about..., which describes a habit.
Overall feedback
Welcome to LangCorrect! Your sentences are clear and easy to follow, which is honestly the hardest part at the beginning. One pattern worth remembering: for how you feel at this moment, English prefers be + worried / excited / nervous over the simple present. I worry about... sounds like something you do every day. Good luck on September 15!
Thank you very much!
This is my first time to write writing (a letter in) on this webwebsite.
Overall feedback
your English is super good but you don't have to be so polite (unless that's just how you text out stuff) also I hope university goes well for you!
thinks!
*thanks* ?
Oh,my inferior error
its okay not bothering me ! :)
This is my first time to write a letter inwriting on this webwebsite.
I will go to my university inon September 15.
I don't have expectationany expectations for my university'suniversity life, because I worry about my relationship
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