Global warming

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In lastrecent years, the temperature of the earthEarth has increased dramatically. this This has caused detrimental and irreversible situationschanges.

soSo, I am going to talk about these circumstances and how could we could prevent the world from global warming.

First of all, global warming is a serious problem that increases the average temperature of the world.

moreover Moreover, it effectsaffects every living creater whocreature that lives in earthon Earth.

Glaciers are melting, down and sea levels getting higherare rising day by day.

asAs a result, some countries are being submerged and animal régionshabitats are shrinking.

So, what could we do about it ?

First of all, we should stop harming nature exxecivelyexcessively, such as bigby destroying large forests like amazonthe Amazon rainforest.

Then, companies must stop release detrimentalreleasing harmful gases such as carbon dioxide and more .

Lastly, it is mandatoryimportant to protect animalanimals from overfishing.

In last few years, earth's temperature of the earth has increased dramatically, this which has caused detrimental and irreversible situationseffects.

"which" has a cause and effect. Temperature increase = detrimental

so, I amI'm going to talk about these changed circumstances and how could we prevent world from further global warming

global warming is already happening, "further' means more global warming.

First of all, global warming is a serious problem that increases the average global temperature of the world.

sounds a bit robotic when you wrote initially, nothing wrong but just would change it a bit

moreover Moreover, it effectsaffects every living creater who lives inthing on earth.

effects vs affects quite different. the pain of english haha

Glaciers melting down and sea levels getting higher day by day.

no need for "down" in this case

asAs a result, some countries are being submerged and animal régionshabitats are shrinking

So, what couldcan we do about it ?

First of all, we should stop excessively harming nature exxecively such as big forests like amazonthe forests in the Amazon.

having "big" in here feels a bit abrupt.

ThenSecond/ then, companies must stop release detrimentaltoxic gases such as carbon dioxide and more others.

Lastly, it isshould be mandatory to protect animalanimals from overfishing.

In last years temperature of the earth has increased dramatically this caused detrimental and irreversible situations.

No change suggested

the temperature guide/report has increased dramatically causing .........

Glaciers are melting down and sea levels getting higher day by day.

First of all we should stop harming nature exxecively such as big forests like amazon.

No change suggested

**excessively