About My School Trip 2

I got a lot of bruisebruises on my legs.

Sentence is mostly correct, but you can add introductory context information to your sentence to help it sound less stiff. Example: "While on the trip, I got a lot of bruises on my legs."

I don't know when and whyhow.

It's more common to question "how" you got bruises, instead of "why".

In normaldaily life, you instantly realize and know after you hit your body because you feel like "Oh〜 itOw! That hurt." or "It's really painful."

HoweberHowever, I did not.

Maybe my attention were not in that way andwas on something else or I was lost in conversation with my friends.

I didsat by the campfire twice.

I ate burnedroasted marshmallows.

"Burned" would indicate that they where very charred and inedible.

Some poeplepeople were burnedroasting theirs untilluntil it turned to the black on purpose.

I thought there are some people howho do the same thing in every country, not only Japan.

This is very true.

At the second campfire, wea group of us with our instructors tried to make a fire to eat marshmallows by a group with instructorsagain.

But I couldn't even havecreate a big enough spark.

One person wereseemed like a professional and he easolyeasily made a fire.

I also did hikinghiked for five hours.

Here is another sentence where you could add context to which day you did the hiking. Example: "Sitting by the fire, I realized how tired I was because I also hiked for five hours earlier that day."

We were fine untilluntil the second break, but we were getting tired and some group people couldn't chatcould barely talk.

Good phrases for this situation: > People had to 'catch their breath'. > People were 'out of breath'.

itThe hike had some steep hills.

It sounded more taughtstructured than this trip.

This is the only sentence I'm not quite sure what you are trying to say. "Taught" refers more to learning about something. Example: "I was taught not to put my elbows on the table when eating." But it sounds unnatrual for a trip to be "taught".

I got a lot of bruisebruises on my legs.

I don't know when and whyor how.

In normal lifeNormally, you instantly realize and know after you hitwhen your body has been hit because you feel likethink "Oh!〜 it That hurt." or "It's really painful."

HoweberHowever, I did not.

Maybe my attention were not in that way and I was distracted and lost in conversation with my friends.

I didmade a campfire twice.

I ate burnedtoasted marshmallows.

Some poeple werepeople burned theirs untilltheir marshmallows until it turned to the black on purpose.

I thoughtthink that there are some people howho do the same thingthat in every country, not only Japan.

AtDuring the second campfire, we tried to make a fire to eat marshmallows bywith a group with instructors.

I couldn't even haveget a big spark.

One person werewas like a professional and he easolyeasily made a fire.

I also didwent hiking for five hours.

We were fine untilluntil the second break, but we were getting tired, and so some group peoplemembers couldn't chat anymore.

it hadThere were some steep hills.

SnacksThe snacks and foodsfood that we got werehad really helpful tohelped us recover our conditions, specifically,energy. Especially the chocolate.

I heard I wouldthat we will jump into mud onduring next year's trip.

It soundedThat sounds more taughttough than this trip.