They Are Our Heroes

I think (to be)/ being a housewife is really hard.

Both work! Being is shorter.

Being in home consistently and dealing with housework affectaffects them both physically and psychologically.

Seeing less people is really more difficult than as we think.

I would maybe phrase it like "not seeing many people" instead of saying "seeing less people". Unless you make a comparison, e.g. "seeing less people than most others who go out in the day or work outside thebhome"

I'm sure their situation is hard as well but some moms don't choose to bebecome housewifes by choice.

Choose and choice both are double so no need to have both.

They are sometimes forced to leave from their jobjobs and take care of their childchildren or sometimes they willingly choose this option.

Both in two situation as time goes by they generally struggle to turn their back on their jobjobs and sometimes they can't achieve this goal.

In two situation, meaning like "dilemma"? Or just "in both situations"? Sounds like you mean the latter. So maybe "In both situations, as time goes by, they generally struggle to turn their back on their jobs and sometimes they can't achieve this goal"

I think to bebeing a housewife is really hard.

Housewife is kind of an old-timey word, I think "stay-at-home mom" tends to be more common now at least where I live in the US. It's correctly used here tho so I'm leaving it as-is.

Being inat home consistentlyconstantly and dealing with housework can affect them both physically and psychologically.

Seeing less peopleLoneliness is really more difficult than as we think.

Of course, I'm not criticizing working moms who are both workingbalancing a job and dealing with housework.

I'm sure their situation is hard as well, but some moms don't choose to be housewifesaren't housewives by choice.

"don't choose to be..." and "not...by choice" convey the same meaning, so using both at the same time is unnecessary. An equally correct way to rewrite this sentence would be: I'm sure their situation is hard as well, but some moms don't choose to be housewives.

They are sometimes forcedhave to leave from their job andto take care of their child, or sometimes they willingly choose this optionbut sometimes because they have no other choice.

BothBut in two situationboth situations, as time goes by, they generally struggle to turn backreturn to their jobold jobs, and sometimes they just can't achieve this goal.

So, I think they deserve a paymentrecognition.

Payment means giving money to someone in exchange for goods or services. Not sure if this is what you intended, but I replaced it with a word that more closely matches the feeling from the next 2 sentences.

I would like to thank all mothers, - especially my own, for their dedication.

While two em dashes could work, I think it's more common in writing now to use commas on both sides of the interrupting clause.