My Sleep Schedule
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Last night, I went to bed around 11 p.m. and somehow woke up around 2 a.m. That's because my wife gave me an oral sex. After that I couldn't go back to sleep easily. I don't want to make love with my wife again because she always has relationships with her lovers. I probably slept a little bit, but I felt like I was tossing and turning all night. My sleep schedule gets completely messed up every once in a while. Hopefully, I'll be able to sleep well tonight.
昨晚我大约在晚上 11 点上床睡觉，然后不知怎么就凌晨 2 点左右醒了。 这是因为我的妻子给我做口交。 之后我就再也无法入睡了。 我不想再和我的妻子做爱，因为她总是和她的情人有性关系。 我可能睡了一点，但感觉整晚都在辗转反侧。 我的作息时间偶尔会变得一团糟。希望今晚我能睡个好觉。
That's because my wife gave me an oral sex.
"Gave me oral sex" is very formal sounding. You might consider the more informal (but more commonly used in casual speech) phrases "head" or "blowjob".
I don't want to make love with my wife again because she always has relationships with her lovers.
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"Always has relationships with her lovers" sounds weird because a "relationship" has an extended duration and is not something that is completed quickly. What do you mean by "always" here? Do you mean that she has several lovers at once, and often sleeps with them? Or do you mean that she often starts relationships with new lovers?
Hopefully, I'll be able to sleep well tonight.
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Well written :-) I hope you are able to fix your sleep schedule
That's because my wife gave me an oral sex.
From the previous sentence, you use "somehow." It gives the impression that this might require an explanation, but you give us the explanation in this sentence right after. However, it also is a little blunt so it really emphasizes the sentence.
After that, I couldn't go back to sleep easily.
I might write instead here, "After that, it took me a long time to fall asleep again."
I don't want to make love with my wife again because she always has relationships with her lovers.
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Was worrying about this keeping you from falling asleep? Or was it the interruption itself?
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