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michiru

Nov. 4, 2024

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Joker movie (spoiler alert)

Today is a nice day neither hot nor cold.
I went out for the movie, Joker Folie a Deux.

Arthur(Joker) as a main character was stabbed to death at the last scene.

Several commentators say that Arthur may be the first legend Joker who influences some people to be Joker later on in Gotham city.
Arthur's death would generate the second and the third, the forth Joker continuously.

I don't know if the third movie is made.
But if there is, I hope to see Arthur's perfect Joker after he lost everything, being revived from the hell.
If possible, I hope that last is this scene that the strongest Joker faces Batman.


ジョーカーの映画(ネタバレ注意)

今日は暑くもなく寒くもなく、過ごしやすい日だった。
ジョーカーを見に行ってきた。
最後のシーンで主人公アーサー(ジョーカー)は刺されて終わる。

コメンテーター達は、アーサーは多分ゴッサムシティで人びとにジョーカーになるよう影響を与える伝説的な最初のジョーカーだろうと言っている。
アーサーの死が第二、第三、第四のジョーカーを生み出すだろうと。

3作目があるかどうかわからないけど、もしあれば、全てを失い、地獄から蘇ったアーサーの、仕上がったジョーカーを見てみたい。
可能であれば、その最後は最強のジョーカーとバットマンのご対面シーンだといいな〜

Corrections

Today is a nice day, neither hot nor cold.

But if there is, I hope to see Arthur's perfect Joker after he lost everything, being revived from the hell.

Joker movie (spoiler alert)

Today is a nice day, neither hot nor cold.

I went out for the movie,to see a movie called Joker Folie a Deux.

Arthur(Joker) as a, the main character, was stabbed to death at the last scene.

I assume the actor himself wasn’t actually stabbed to death 😂
I recommend you phrase sentences like this differently, something like “Joker, the main character, played by Arthur,

Several commentators say that Arthur may be the first legendary Joker who influences some people to become Joker later on in Gotham city.

Arthur's death would generatebring forth the second and, the third, the fourth Joker continuouslyand so on.

I don't know if the third movie is madebeing worked on.

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michiru

Nov. 5, 2024

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Thank you very much for the correction and the advice!

Today is a nice day, neither hot nor cold.

I went out forto see the movie, Joker Folie aà Deux.

We usually say either we "go to the movies" or we "go see a movie". When you want to mention a specific movie, it sounds more natural to say it the second way if you want to mention the specific movie.

Arthur (Joker) as a main character was stabbed to death atin the last scene.

Several commentators say that Arthur may be the first legendary Joker who influences some people to be Joker later on in Gotham city.

Arthur's death would generate the second and, the third, the forth Joker continuouslyand so on.

I don't know if the third movie iswill be made.,

If you're not sure if there will be a new movie coming out, you can use "will be made". If you mean that you're unsure if they are currently working on the third movie, you can say "is being made".

Bbut if ithere is, I hope to see Arthur's perfect Joker after he lost everything, being revived from the hell.

Usually we try to avoid starting phrases with "but".

If possible, I hope that the last is this scene is that of the strongest Joker facesing Batman.

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I haven't watched the movie as I'm not really into movies all that much, but it looks interesting! ^^

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michiru

Nov. 4, 2024

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Thank you very much for the correction and the advice!
Joker is a dark movie. I recommend Venom. This was interesting.

Joker movie (spoiler alert)


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Today is a nice day neither hot nor cold.


Today is a nice day, neither hot nor cold.

Today is a nice day, neither hot nor cold.

Today is a nice day, neither hot nor cold.

I went out for the movie, Joker Folie a Deux.


I went out forto see the movie, Joker Folie aà Deux.

We usually say either we "go to the movies" or we "go see a movie". When you want to mention a specific movie, it sounds more natural to say it the second way if you want to mention the specific movie.

I went out for the movie,to see a movie called Joker Folie a Deux.

Arthur(Joker) as a main character was stabbed to death at the last scene.


Arthur (Joker) as a main character was stabbed to death atin the last scene.

Arthur(Joker) as a, the main character, was stabbed to death at the last scene.

I assume the actor himself wasn’t actually stabbed to death 😂 I recommend you phrase sentences like this differently, something like “Joker, the main character, played by Arthur,

Several commentators say that Arthur may be the first legend Joker who influences some people to be Joker later on in Gotham city.


Several commentators say that Arthur may be the first legendary Joker who influences some people to be Joker later on in Gotham city.

Several commentators say that Arthur may be the first legendary Joker who influences some people to become Joker later on in Gotham city.

Arthur's death would generate the second and the third, the forth Joker continuously.


Arthur's death would generate the second and, the third, the forth Joker continuouslyand so on.

Arthur's death would generatebring forth the second and, the third, the fourth Joker continuouslyand so on.

I don't know if the third movie is made.


I don't know if the third movie iswill be made.,

If you're not sure if there will be a new movie coming out, you can use "will be made". If you mean that you're unsure if they are currently working on the third movie, you can say "is being made".

I don't know if the third movie is madebeing worked on.

But if there is, I hope to see Arthur's perfect Joker after he lost everything, being revived from the hell.


Bbut if ithere is, I hope to see Arthur's perfect Joker after he lost everything, being revived from the hell.

Usually we try to avoid starting phrases with "but".

But if there is, I hope to see Arthur's perfect Joker after he lost everything, being revived from the hell.

If possible, I hope that last is this scene that the strongest Joker faces Batman.


If possible, I hope that the last is this scene is that of the strongest Joker facesing Batman.

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