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I moved to new accommodation and I start to explore a new district around. The situation with cafes in the area turned out to be much better than I expected. Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast arounded green rice fields. Then I would just riding thought the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool. The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of green around the road. I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them I would go to the shore. There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot). I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks. And don't definitely understand why. I guess the answer is in all the little things above.
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I moved to new accommodation and I startstarted to explore athe new district around there.
There's one specific district around your accommodation, so it's better to use "the"
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast aroundedaround green rice fields.
Then I would just riding thoughtride though the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching onthe waves and after-the reflection of the sunset in the sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
I also sent the pictures to my closest peoplefriends in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit.
And I don't definitely understand why.
I moved in to new accommodation and I start to explorestarted exploring a new district around.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast aroundedsurrounded by green rice fields.
Then I would just riding thoughtride through the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of greengreenery around the road.
There, I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the lastpast few weeks, and I don't exactly understand why.
And don't definitely understand why.(combined with previous)
Overall feedback
Very good, just some minor edits to make it sound more natural. I'm glad you're settling in well at your new place, and taking time to appreciate nature.
Thank you for your comments!
I moved to a new accommodationplace and I startstarted to explore a newthe district around it.
1) "Accommodation" is extremely formal when using it for the place you live. Usually, one would say "house," "apartment," "place," etc.. "Place" is the most generic, so I picked that. 2) You've introduced us to a place you live with "a new place," so we know we're talking about a location already. "A district" could mean the district you live in or a district that's nearby, so you should single out one option with "the". "My district" would also be ok.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast aroundedsurrounded by green rice fields.
Then I would justgo riding thoughtthrough the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
The buildingsBuildings here are spread out in the area, so you couldcan see a lot of greengreenery around the road.
1) The first clause edit is just a suggestion that sounds more natural. 2) "could" puts this clause in the past.
I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them, I wouldmight go to the shore.
"would" in this context makes it sound like you might have gone there in the past, not the general present.
There, I experiencedexperience a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and the after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours, which I do a lot).
I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotionsemotion of it with them and tease them a bit.
"the emotions" sounds awkward. I made it a bit more specific.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks,.
Combined this sentence with the one after.
Andand don't definitelyfully understand why.
"Definitely" is used more for situations where you're arguing against doubt. It kind of works here, but "fully", "completely," or the more formal "definitively" would be better.
Overall feedback
Well done. Wherever you are, this sounds like a lovely day to have! With some sentences after the first 3, I can't tell if you're doing them regularly or whether you've just done them once in the past. I've made corrections assuming that you might do all of these things regularly after moving to your new place.
Thank you for the explainatons. I tried to tell about the several time activities during the past, through grammar tenses, but I'm not clear in it yet :))
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