How learning languages has influenced your life?

How learning languages has influenced your life?

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I spend mucha lot of time with learning languages, and it has (significantly/deeply) influenced my lifestyle.

1) We don’t use ‘much’ in positive sentences, we use it instead in questions. The better choice is ‘a lot of’. 2) You do not need to use ‘with’ here. 3) Your last sentence feels a little unfinished, we tend to use modifiers in sentences like this to show how much something has changed our lives.

Also I'm really interested in this language:

1) You do not need ‘also’ here because in your previous sentence you talked about focusing on German, therefore the reader already knows that you are interested in German.

However, German is also a littlevery hard for me.

1) While you can use ‘a little’ here, in your next sentences you talked about your struggles, so it makes more sense to use very.

Nevertheless, I practice German every day, so it getsits getting better!

1) ‘It’s getting better’ shows that your skills in German are (currently) improving

I also want to improve my skills in English, because it's very important for my future.

1) I would use ‘to want’ to show that this that this is your wish/desire.

Many people speak English inis spoken around the world, so I shouldneed to pay special attention to this language.

I tryna learnam trying to study English every day, and usually I don't have many problems with it.

1) ‘tryna’ isn’t a word that you can write, it is more of a ‘phonetic slang’ that shows how we shorten the word in spoken English. 2) ‘To study’ is better here because it shows the process of learning English. Learning is more about the result, while studying is about the process.

I find English easy, but I really need to work withon my speaking and writing.

1) Work with = tools, people or materials Work on= improving something

I can understand manya lot of information in English, however my communication isn't sovery good.

1) ‘Information’ is an uncountable noun, therefore we cannot use ‘much’ with it. Instead we have to use ‘a lot of’. 2) We do not use ‘not so good’ in English, it is more common to use ‘very’ here.

Learning languages is really important for my future, because so that I can talk withto people from other countries.

1) ‘So that’ is better here because it shows the purpose or goal of your hard work.

I also canand improve my thinking skills.

1) It’s better to connect your sentence with ‘and’ here. 2) ‘thinking skills’ is okay but you’d be more likely to hear something like ‘improve my ability to think in English’.

For example, I read in and listen into German and English, so that I can learn something moredeepen my understanding, and itwhich helps me with self-improvement.

I can understand materials in other languages without bigany major problems.

1) Because you have used the plural ‘problems’ here, the natural alternatives, - Without much trouble - Without any major problems

If I spoke German and English goodwell, I would achieve manyreach my goals in the future.

1) We need to use the adverb ‘well’ here.