Eruption of anger

Eruption of angerAnger

Use title case.

I sleep for 7hours7 hours on an average.

But if I was'tdon't sleep enough I'd be eruption of angerI'm super temperamental.

Instead of "eruption of anger", we use "short tempered" or "temperamental".

It is said to bethat most peoplepeople__________.

This is a dependent clause, meaning the sentence written needs another piece. To finish, say something like "It is said that most people need a lot of sleep." or "It is said that most people sometimes have short tempers."

An Eruption of angerAnger

You want to capitalize all major words in a title as well as the first and last.

I sleep for 7hours7 hours on an average every night.

The addition of "every night" isn't necessary but sounds much better when speaking.

But if I was'tdon't sleep enough, I'd be eruption of anger I become very grumpy the next day.

"Being an eruption of anger" isn't used in English. There are many alternatives you could use depending on just how upset you get without sleep. "very irritable" is reasonable. Most people would probably use this as it's suitable to be said in the workplace. "a force to be reckoned with" is very dramatic but could be used for dramatic effect.

It isIt's said to be the case most people.

Eruption of angerAnger

We typically capitalize the first letter of important words in titles

I sleep for 7hours7 hours on an average.

But if I was'tdon't sleep enough, I'd be eruption of angerirritable.

An "eruption of anger" is like, someone throwing things at someone else because they are so angry, or someone breaking their monitor or their game controller in a fit because they're so angry at the game. Wild, explosive, violent fits of emotion. My guess is that this is more emotion than you mean in this instance. My guess is "irritable" is the word you're looking for here.

It is said toThis can be said about most people.

Eruption of angerAnger

I sleep for 7hours7 hours on an average.

Or: I sleep seven hours a night on average.

(But) if I was'tdon’t sleep enough I'd be eruption oferupt in anger.

It is said to be most people.

No change suggested

I don’t understand this sentence.