Writing prompt
A pill has been invented, and if you take it, you will not need to eat for a week. Will you buy this pill? Why or why not?A Mysterious Pill
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For me, I would try to check if the ingredients included in the pill is not harmful to humanity. If it is safe to us, I rekon I would try to eat it, because it's quite similar as the Senzu in Dragon ball! When I was a child, I really dream to become a saiyan. Oh, sorry, it's a bit far away from the topic. Anyway, if the pill is really invented, I would want to try it. As it can not only save your food expense, but also it's full of future potentiality.
If a mysterious pill were invented, I would try to check the ingredients to make sure that it is not harmful to humans. If it is safe for humans, I suppose I would try to eat it, because it would be quite similar to the Senzu Bean from Dragon Ball! When I was a child, I really dreamd of becoming a Saiyan. Oh, sorry, I’ve gone off topic. Anyway, if that pill is really invented, I would want to try it. The pill is not just limited to saving food expenses, but is also full of other future potentials.
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ドラゴンボールですねwww 面白いです そして、"reckon"は方言で、書き言葉で滅多に使いません。英語の標準語では "suppose"が使えます。
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細かいところまで修正してくれてありがとうございます！解説もわかりやすくて助かります！ I hope I can speak or write natural English one day!
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When I was a child, I really dream to becomedreamed of becoming a saiyanSaiyan.
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People often say "that's (a bit) off topic", which is a phrase that would fit well here, I think.
Anyway, if the pill is really was invented, I would want to try it.
AsThis is because it can not only savereduce your food expenseexpenses, but also it's full of future potentialitypotential.
I think starting a sentence with "as it can" is not very natural. It would be better to do something like this, or to join this sentence to the previous one.
Thank you very much! I like such helpful advices. I will try to do more practice to make my English more natural!
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I reckon is fine, "I guess" or "I suppose that" are alternatives.
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from Dragon Ball Z? xD
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or "off-topic"
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Overall feedback
Great text! I agree it would be nice to not have to buy as much food, but I also love eating good food! ^^;
Yes, Dragon Ball Z is a very fascinating anime:D!
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