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I sponsored two girls, who are respectively an Indian girl and a Bolivia girl now, via Wold Vision last year.

I received their yearly reports recently and found that they have not advanced to next grade due to Covid-19.

The Indian girl,12, is still in 5th grade, and the girl in Bovia, 13, is still in sixth grade.

Covid-19 has postponed their study by one year.

I want to whine about World Vision for inefficiency.

It took me one year to receive a replay from a letter I sent to the girl one year ago.

I agree to sponsor them until my credit card expires, and I've deice that I will stop sponsoring after that.

I want to donate my money to animal care organizations instead.

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1 week, 3 days ago
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Wold Vision
I sponsored two girls, who are, respectively, an Indian girl and a Bolivian girl now, via World Vision last year.
I received their yearly reports recently and found that they have not advanced to the next grade due to Covid-19.
I want to whcomplaine about World Vision for their inefficiency.
"whine" isn't incorrect but complain sounds better; we tend to use whine in a negative manner about other people
It took me one year to receive a replay from a letter I sent to the girl one year ago.
I agree to sponsor them until my credit card expires, and I've deicecided that I will stop sponsoring after that.
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1 week, 3 days ago
World Vision
I sponsored two girls, who are respectively an Indian girl and a Bolivia girl now, via World Vision last year.
The Indian girl,12, is still in 5th grade, and the girl in Bolivia, 13, is still in sixth grade.
I want to whine about World Vision for inefficiencypoint out the inefficiency of World Vision.
It took me onea year to receive a replay from a letter I sent to the girl one year ago.
I agree to sponsor them until my credit card expires, and after that I've deicecided that I will stop sponsoring after thatthem.
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  • I sponsored two girls, who are respectively an Indian girl and a Bolivia girl now, via Wold Vision last year.
  • I sponsored two girls, who are, respectively, an Indian girl and a Bolivian girl now, via World Vision last year.

  • I sponsored two girls, who are respectively an Indian girl and a Bolivia girl now, via World Vision last year.

  • I received their yearly reports recently and found that they have not advanced to next grade due to Covid-19.
  • I received their yearly reports recently and found that they have not advanced to the next grade due to Covid-19.

  • The Indian girl,12, is still in 5th grade, and the girl in Bovia, 13, is still in sixth grade.
  • The Indian girl,12, is still in 5th grade, and the girl in Bolivia, 13, is still in sixth grade.

  • Covid-19 has postponed their study by one year.
  • I want to whine about World Vision for inefficiency.
  • I want to whcomplaine about World Vision for their inefficiency.

    "whine" isn't incorrect but complain sounds better; we tend to use whine in a negative manner about other people
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  • I want to whine about World Vision for inefficiencypoint out the inefficiency of World Vision.

  • It took me one year to receive a replay from a letter I sent to the girl one year ago.
  • It took me one year to receive a replay from a letter I sent to the girl one year ago.

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  • It took me onea year to receive a replay from a letter I sent to the girl one year ago.

  • I agree to sponsor them until my credit card expires, and I've deice that I will stop sponsoring after that.
  • I agree to sponsor them until my credit card expires, and I've deicecided that I will stop sponsoring after that.

  • I agree to sponsor them until my credit card expires, and after that I've deicecided that I will stop sponsoring after thatthem.

  • I want to donate my money to animal care organizations instead.
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